MThe Teacher, the Sorceress, and the Wonderbolt
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
Twilight has not one, not two, but three ponies after her affections. Who will she choose?
Sex
Twilight
Trixie
Cheerilee
Spitfire
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322 weeks
Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather
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342 weeks
Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.
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343 weeks
Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want
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344 weeks
Slight revamp

So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.
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367 weeks
Question for any Italian speakers out there

So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To
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Jan

1st

2014

New Stuff Coming... Soonish · 6:26am Jan 1st, 2014

Hey, all! Been a while since I posted anything, so I mainly wanted to let you know that I'm not dead, and the new prequel to TSW has been fully outlined. And by fully outlined, I mean I wrote down all the pertinent plot points that I need to keep track of, so as to not have another train wreck. If all goes well, I'll have the cover done by the end of the week, and I can start actually writing! I'm still planning something special for the story, so actual updates of chapters will be slow, at least, at first. There are 17 tentative chapters, but that number is likely to change as the story progresses (hopefully in the upwards direction). As a special treat, I'm letting you get an early peek at the cover. More as things develop!

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Blue_Paladin42

Blue_Paladin42 #1 · Jan 1st, 2014 · · ·

Oooooooooh. I didn't know you drew!
Verra nice!

Blue_Paladin42

Blue_Paladin42 #2 · Jan 1st, 2014 · · ·

That image makes me think Fire Emblem for some reason.

Oh lawdy, now I am imagining Twilight casting FE VII's nuke spells. Or maybe just the spell Luna.

Wrabbit

Wrabbit #3 · Jan 3rd, 2014 · · ·

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Yeah, I drew long before I ever took up the writing pen... er, keyboard. You can check out my DA page if you like. The link is on my profile page.