Deleted Content and Some other stuff - I just wanted to go to Equestria

TL;DR CHAPTER EXTRAS AS WELL AS SOMETHING ABOUT MY WRITING IN GENERAL
There, I saved you the work in case you don't want to read.

Heeello, people! As I promised, here is the extra deleted stuff that I didn't put in the actual chapter(s) for one reason or another, and also a reminder for those who didn't know that two new chapters are out.

Keep in mind that these bits may contain spoilers one way or another, so there is that.

Alright, here is the first, it was a part that I considered putting in the actual chapter, but I felt it was far too convoluted to fit into the usually simple story, this is set at the beginning of chapter 6 "Deal with it"

Ah, yes, Monday… You can go die for all I care.

Faster than someone can manage to say ‘deoxyribonucleic acid’ I’m at school, already in class, thankfully, I’m not able to focus due to me trying to wrap my head around the message from last night, and while I am called to pay attention once or twice, it doesn’t really interrupt my train of thought and the most important thing.

‘To go, or not to go… That is the question.’

“Um… Lemon?” calls Fluttershy who is sitting on the desk across mine after being split into pairs to test each other on a review sheet that I couldn’t honestly care about less… I could try, though.

“Sorry, Fluttershy… What’s up?” I say as delicately as I can, having been in this class long enough to know that she will overreact to anything said the wrong way.

“Well… Um… It’s y-your turn to answer a question…” ah, yes. The test in a few days.

“Oh, right… Shoo-I mean, go ahead and ask!” I correct instantly, getting an odd look from her.

“Okay… Um… ‘What is the organ that most humans have that is considered a disease by many medical experts?’”

“Um… The heart?” Fluttershy giggles, well, my heart is melting so I must be at least close.

“Literally close, but wrong… You’d make a terrible doctor, though, Lemon,” she says without sounding vicious, and then points out the answer to me on the paper. “No, it’s this, see? ‘Magicis Cantibus or Magical Music organ referred most commonly. It is the added part inside most humans that allows them to sing in harmonious order, but cannot be removed due to its placement and close mutualistic connection to the heart’” huh… Well look at that.

“Ah… I see… I’ll remember that, Fluttershy…” I take it back; the message is now at the back of my head, as the fact that I have an organ inside me that allows me to sing is just FUCKING awesome.

As I said, it became FAR too technical, I was going to make it a thing and give it a long winded explanation, but that would have become single padding, and I don't like doing that when I can, so that too.

Now this next one is for chapter 9 "Magic Failure", which is the newest, and due to that, spoilers and such abound, so if you don't want them.

I
SUGGEST
YOU
STOP
READIIIIING

This is an alternate (not finished, mind you) take on what would have happened if Pat had done something to get Trixie to help him when he goes to her house.

“I did… But you know, I did it without being mindful of your feelings, and for that, I apologize, magic must be a very tough thing to do, even for someone as great as you, oh, Great and Powerful Trixie,” she flinches at the term visibly affected by my words… Damn it Pinkie, you were onto something back then.

“W-well… Tri- I can’t be bothered to be perfect in everything!” she says, struggling for the words to come out.

“Of course not! But imagine if you were to master it, oh, you Great and Powerful Trixie,” I look at her fingers which are twitching in place. Just a little push.

“Um, it’s just that Trixie doesn’t know…” she looks down, trying to avoid eye contact with me.

“Is Trixie going to let the world see her as weak?” she instantly perks up and walks towards the hat.

“No. She. Will. NOT!” she dons the cape instantly and gets on the coffee table in the middle. “The Great, and Powerful Trixie will not full under such measly comments from the simple beings in the world, Trixie will become the greatest magician of all time!” I wave her cape as she relishes on her moment.

“Fuck yeah!” I add, now all we need is some fitting background music.

“And YOU will help, as Trixie’s assistant!” pardon? “Together, we will r-” I quickly back off, falling back into the nearby couch.

“Now, now, let’s not get ahead of ourselves, I can’t be doing that without any sort of payment,” she looks at me with a mocking smile.

“Trixie supposes that that’s the way the world runs… Very well, Trixie will pay you… Does your simple mind have a wish as simple as you?” goody, the Trixie I know and love is back.

“Not exactly…” I recall what Pinkie told me and sigh, it can’t really fuck me over that much more.

This wasn't put on because... Well, I just didn't 'feel' it, if that makes sense, it felt odd, and just something that didn't flow well with me.

To end this, I would like to ask you, the readers to tell me if you see something wrong in what you read, I would very much appreciate it if you do, as I've enjoyed your feedback quite a bit, as well as the comments you all make, as someone by the name of FanOfMostEverything (whose work I'm actually quite enjoying, check them out) made sure to tell me, and taught me that I've been writing some stuff a bit confusingly, which will now lead to me editing the chapters to make them more readable, as I'm always looking to improve.
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Might add some new jokes if I want to, but that's for the people who care to reread but who has time for that?
... Also the new ones but that's not important.

Anyway, as stated before, I will go back to writing after Christmas, and perhaps, have a new chapter out by New Year's! That's always sweet, right?

And with that, I'm ooooff!

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