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AugieDog


I've been writing and selling stories for longer than a lot of folks reading this have been alive. Check Baal Bunny for more!

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Dec
17th
2013

A Spot of Revision · 9:50pm Dec 17th, 2013

After three months:

Of thinking, I've gone in and rewritten the last strophe of my epyllion "The Laughter and the Night" in an attempt to address the usual reaction to the ending--"it seemed kinda rushed," most folks say. It's a good deal closer now to what I had in mind, but I'll hafta do some more thinking, I think... :twilightblush:

Mike

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PresentPerfect
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I feel I have forced your hand in this. <.<

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You certainly played a part:

And I thank you for it. I was never entirely happy with four of the poem's last seven stanzas, but, well, I've noticed an unfortunate tendancy with regard to the stuff I write just for fun on the site here. When I'm not looking to polish a piece to sell it, I won't clean it up as thoroughly as I do my original stuff. But I don't like myself when I'm not "giving my all" to a project, and I need to stop doing that. :ajbemused:

Mike

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