A Friend and I Made a Series of Comics

No, they're not pony. But I want to share them anyway.

This is just the prologue where I did next to nothing work-wise. She--A young lady by the name of Garvey-- is the cray-cray artist type.

Some thoughts would be nice as we're both sorta new to this art form.

Comments

[Web of Hope]

the images is broke, boss

[RavensDagger]

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Aren't I just a master at this whole "internet" business?

[FanOfMostEverything]

Well, this is creepy. Somewhere between "appetite-deadening" and "bowel-loosening" on the visceral reaction scale.

[ToixStory]

I'm not sure what I'm looking at.

[Aramadon]

So, there's one thing that looks like a doll with stripes on its arms, and then there's a doll without stripes on it's arms...

You are going to write/draw more before you expect people to understand the story, aren't you?
Unless it's supposed to be this cryptic.

Hm...it would help people to give feedback if we knew what you were going for here. If we knew your goals, we could state our views/opinions about whether or not you're accomplishing them.

[thewookie1]

Hmm, what is happening here? Without the 3rd pic I get the image of a random raven flying around and landing near a stuffed doll.

Suddenly the 3rd one seems to hint at a young human owns said doll, a beat up teddy bear and is hiding behind what appears to be a 50's/60's era refrigerator (the handle)

The art is good, creepy, but good.

[CBM8]

Kingdom Time? Some AT creepypasta?

Ravens? Edgar Allan Poe?

Treating a doll like a young child learning to walk? Insanity due to loss or other absence?

Nice art style, but it leaves just too many questions to be some ambiguous tale.

[TheStratovarian]

Interesting little panel set.

[Brony Pony]

Ooh, ominously interesting!

[shutaro]

Hey, that's not creepy at all.

All hail the Glow cloud!

[RavensDagger]

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nightvale

[shutaro]

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The Sheriff's Secret Police would like to remind you that you are not supposed to know that.
Please report to the City Council for immediate de-education.

[Fury of the Tempest]

... Uhhh....