Jan
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2013
Smoke and Mirrors Side Stories · 6:49am Jan 2nd, 2013
Alright, after getting some feedback from some comments on the most recent chapter of Smoke and Mirrors, I've decided that it may be for the best to delete the chapter, tweak a few things, and post it as it's own story. This way, it doesn't feel as tacked on to the end, yet we'll still get to see the story from multiple points of view.
When the edited story is completed, I'll publish it and use the deleted chapter as a link.
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TeaPartyCannon · 864 views
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Sounds OK to me.
Just glad to read more of your story in any format.
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Pretty much this.
Though, I was looking forward to possibly reading that tonight
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You can read it, just know that there's going to be an different, edited version of it published sometime later.
Not sure how later though; just however long it takes me to make the necessary changes.
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I can wait for the edited version. Edited versions tend to be better
you've been updating? dang last thing I remember was a certain changeling flying through the woods dodging a general after going in and kicking flank as a white mare pegasus with blonde hair xD
Is there a way to turn on a chapter updates in the account menu? I even missed 3 Scootamom updates apparently. I swear if no one posts a blog about it it just flies beneath my radar ^^;
Far as sidestories go, I only knew of that one other Changeling story that ran beside yours. Are there others?
Very well.
I intended to read your new chapter later on when my schedule cleared a little. Since you plan on editing it or what have you, please keep us in the loop about your plans. After about a week I'll probably get sick of waiting and read it anyways.
Sounds good, hoss. By the way, is the General's Game exclusively about Carbon and the other stories have the other characters or are the other two parts of GG from different perspectives?
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Generals' Game is exclusively Carbon, but I may just make a single story to hold all three side stories, so like a collection of smaller stories to accompany the main Smoke and Mirrors story.
672465 So there's the three parts of General's game ( I think you said there were three parts. Might be wrong) and then the other two stories? Interesting. Hope it goes well for ya.