Small rewrite of Herding inquiries · 8:12pm March 3rd
Just a small announcement that I've done a minor rewrite to the Epilogue of Herding Inquiries.
More after the break.
Herding Inquiries originally ended with Dew Doe announcing and scaring Sombra that she was pregnant again. However, as I've been mulling over other story ideas and continuing to work on the Temor Sequel. I realized that I honestly didn't like the original ending. Also the way I picture the Herd Dynamic is that Sombra does not like the idea of having children with Dew Doe, as far as he's concerned she should only have children with Private.
So I changed it up so that Dew is only teasing Sombra and wasn't really pregnant. I think it fits better and is something Dew would totally do. She does have her mischievous streaks.
Blue Axe will just have to wait a little longer to get his siblings. Who I do have well planned out for the past eleven years. 
