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Oreonixx Jinn


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Thank you for reading my story

I really appreciate. Just out of curiosity what is your favorite part of it? And who’s your favorite character?

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It was just generic evil government though not suspired it seems similar as there is only so many ways you can make an.evil government that isn't cartoony.

But I'm glad you enjoyed it so well and.i hope you enjoy the sequels.:twilightsmile:

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Oh man, I think one of the things I loved most is that while Twi obviously has issues, she stays in control, despite her true self being a cheerful little murder hobo. The friendship described between Twi and her newfound comrades was great, and the reaction by the rest of the Mane 6, to what Twi had shown them of what she became. I'm kinda curious, was the Earth she ended up on inspired by anything? I mentioned at the start that the glimpse of Earth at the start reminded of Plazma Burst 2, and that last mission reaffirmed that.

On another note, the grammar and spelling issues you had I didn't really process until the end of each chapter, so it wasn't as bad as people were saying. But then again I've read fics on Wattpad, so you don't really stand out to me.

Thank you for adding Soldier of Magic to your Favorites.:twilightsmile:

May I ask what you enjoy about it?

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Anytime, awesome possum!

Always here if you need a friend. 😇

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