Anon writes a shit fic? Aftermath of the Blanks? Family of the Blanks?

I've rewritten chapter 4 of Battle of the Blanks, but I'm trying to figure out the best way to space the chapters and updated the story. FiM still doesn't like reposting old stories.

Still need a proofreader and a test reader for feedback. Also,

I'm debating replacing the Makarov in the story with a Glock 17 9mm or a tokrev TT33 7.62 x25.

Or should I keep it?

I'm probably over thinking irrelevant details.

Looking for one person who likes Battle of the Blanks for proofreading, and feedback. Basically, I need a test reader.

I remade the first three chapters and I need some feedback before I continue. I can PM them or send them a word doc file to whatever email address you want.

I also need the reader to agree to not spoil any of the creative changes to others.. Konrad's intro has been radically changed.

Any takers?

I'm currently re-writing Battle of the Blanks, or at least the first five chapters. Expect significant changes to Konrad's starting premise, POVs, and overall tone of the story will be more serious. I will keep the comedy tag for funny moments when they occur. I have Grammarly, more experience writing under my belt, and a general sense of what NOT to write. He will still be a Brony because I've already incorporated that aspect into my other stories. It will be heavily toned down, though, along

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Seriously, they always devolve into "Ponies are OP" or insults are thrown at me. And when I challenge back, the OP gets onto ME. I messaged OP asking why I was singled out. No reply. I'm pretty pissed off, so much I can't write any more progress to Family of the Blanks.

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I delivered. More updates than Half Life 3. No, Half Life Alyx doesn't count. Go read it.

Okay, I have locked in the direction of the next chapter. It won't be too big, but it shouldn't be too small. Expect bonding with the Apple family. I will find a new hosting site for my images since Photobucket sucks butt. I have all my old commissioned artwork saved on my old laptop, but the wifi adapter is broken. I need to figure out how to transfer them. Another challenge is I need to hunt down my old commission artist to update the Battle of the Blanks cover page. Her Deviant Art account

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I have made corrections to all of my stories minus Battle of the Blanks. That one will be a mountain of time to fix. I will also be making some changes to Battle as to how Konrad got there or his reasons for leaving Raccoon City. Should I leave that aspect of the story alone and focus only on spelling and grammar? I also will be seeking out my old artist to commission a new cover page, similar to Aftermath and Family.

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The next chapter for AotB is 30 percent done, and I am making corrections to my other docs. I bought a Grammarly subscription and noticed that I made a ton of mistakes. I knew I made some, but never knew just how massive it was. Correcting BotB will be a huge undertaking.

I will also make corrections to AotB before releasing the next chapter. I have already made complete corrections to Living the Dream, and the last Anon shit chapter.

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What the title says. I'm finally settled in a dorm room and my scheduled is stabilized. Aftermath of the Blanks update has just begun. Once Aftermath update is completed, Family of the Blanks is next. Hope you guys enjoy, you're getting more now than you'll ever from Valve making Half Life 3.