Aftermath update and corrections....

The next chapter for AotB is 30 percent done, and I am making corrections to my other docs. I bought a Grammarly subscription and noticed that I made a ton of mistakes. I knew I made some, but never knew just how massive it was. Correcting BotB will be a huge undertaking.

I will also make corrections to AotB before releasing the next chapter. I have already made complete corrections to Living the Dream, and the last Anon shit chapter.

My question is, other than spelling and grammar, what would you guys like me to change in Battle of the Blanks? I want to make the best content for you guys, so your input would be helpful.

Comments

[Wise2Fox]

Sure i try if i can

[Bronycommander]

i am sure it will be worth, quality is important

[HumanSVD]

5673552
Anything format wise of battle of the blanks you want me to change?

[Wise2Fox]

5673558
if you notice you tend to repeat monologues and thats not healthly for the story

[HumanSVD]

5673562
I will delete repeats and povs of the same scene

[Witchery]

5673565
I'd be cautious with that. It's been a bit since I read it, but I remember that many of the different POV's provided unique insight into each situation and character.

[HumanSVD]

5673608
Many people hated that. If I could swap back and forth somehow, that would be good and cut down on clutter.