Battle of the Blanks changes · 12:39pm Aug 7th, 2022
I'm currently re-writing Battle of the Blanks, or at least the first five chapters. Expect significant changes to Konrad's starting premise, POVs, and overall tone of the story will be more serious. I will keep the comedy tag for funny moments when they occur. I have Grammarly, more experience writing under my belt, and a general sense of what NOT to write. He will still be a Brony because I've already incorporated that aspect into my other stories. It will be heavily toned down, though, along with him talking to himself.
The love triangle aspect will remain since it's inspired by Mass Effect 1 Liara vs. Ashley shipping choices. I hope with the changes; it will be a better product than it was before. I will also add bloopers chapters, a funny ending chapter, and a Bad ending chapter...maybe on that last one.
EDIt: I also need a test reader. Someone who likes my story, and wants to see it improve. Person would need to read Konrad's intro chapter and his new premise of arriving in Equestria.
I'm also trying to find a new artist to commission a new cover page. I can't get a hold of my old one; she's out of the art world, for now, I guess.
whatever you think suits best, I will be with you all the way
its great you're getting back into writing. I enjoyed the blank series. I'm really excited to read more of your stories.
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Have you checked out Aftermath and Family? I just updated those two.
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i have seen them and i plan i reading them soon.I haven't been this excited since the update of another story i enjoy.