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Dafaddah


Stories about families, friends, the past, the present, the future, the science of magic and the magic of science.

May
27th
2012

A new story and a departure · 3:46am May 27th, 2012

Hello friends,



I am a big fan of Chatoyance and highly recommend anything she's written. Recently I read her Conversion Bureau story Brand New Universe Chapter 7: Mankind Triumphant. It affected me deeply. It was a significant departure from her usual style in that it did not have a happy ending for ponykind and their princesses. In fact it contained many very disturbing images more in line with the horror genre. It really bothered me and I kept thinking about it.

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May
13th
2012

So now what? · 12:12am May 13th, 2012

I have just completed my second fanfic, "The Good of the Many". Actually, I started writing TGOTM before I did "The Vacation Crew" for the February Write-off, which is my first completed fic.

As when I finished TVC, I will not change its substance (plot), but I may rework chapters to improve the writing, and readability, and to fix any inconsistencies I or my readers will find.

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Feb
10th
2012

Need... more.... brains.... · 10:18pm Feb 10th, 2012

Hello gentle readers (yeah, I'm talking to you!)

PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE give me some feedback on the story so far, the characters, the plot, pacing, writing style, what you would like to see happen... anything, PLEASE!

I started this as a learning exercise and to develop my writing skills. I must admit that I enjoy do this enormously, but I would nevertheless very much appreciate your comments and suggestions for improvement.

Warmest regards,

Dafaddah the Bearded

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Feb
5th
2012

The joy of parallel universes · 5:00am Feb 5th, 2012

Chapter 6 was a challenge, but I am really happy with how it developed. Having parallel characters as well as situations is both constraining and a great opportunity for a few laughs! In the next chapter we finally get back to Celestia's PoV, and more is revealed of her (and Luna's) past as well as their place in the universe, and how they shaped politics and life in Equestria.

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Jan
29th
2012

Is it foreshadowing if it happens in the past? Biggest chapter yet. · 9:04pm Jan 29th, 2012

I am finaly getting to those conversations that describe some of the history of Equestria and try to provide answers to some burning questions (well at least these questions were burning in my mind as the FIM episodes that dealt with the founding and history of Equestria were broadcast.)
1) why does Equestrian culture have so many parallels to Humanity's science, architecture, science and art?

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Jan
20th
2012

First story submission, and first blog · 6:49pm Jan 20th, 2012

I just posted the first chapter of the first fanfic story I've written entitled "The good of the many". I intend to explore a bit more the governing structure established by the Equestrian goddess-princesses, and the events and decisions that have led up to it.

Of ourse, constructive criticism is very welcome, although nasty criticism can also be fun!

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