Need... more.... brains....

Hello gentle readers (yeah, I'm talking to you!)

PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE give me some feedback on the story so far, the characters, the plot, pacing, writing style, what you would like to see happen... anything, PLEASE!

I started this as a learning exercise and to develop my writing skills. I must admit that I enjoy do this enormously, but I would nevertheless very much appreciate your comments and suggestions for improvement.

Warmest regards,

Dafaddah the Bearded

PS - I hope that wasn't too needy. It's Friday afternoon and I'm just starting to let out the stress if the week in preparation for the weekend. ;-{)}