I know the story reached 1k upvotes, I know plenty of people like it, but... I'm not content with how it is right now. I wanted to edit it for it to become better, but I'm not sure I can do that without giving myself a nasty headache and a broken story in the process. The rewrite will still follow the same plotline, but it will be much better due to my improved writing skills. What do you people think?