A new darkness shrouds over the minds of those eager to move onto greater feats of wickedness. The Lil Tempter is in Canterlot and is eager to gain back the power he lost in a confusing battle.

A complete remake of my most unsuccessful story i posted the first chapter of over 2 years ago. I hope that this remake will be more successful.
Based on The Living Tombstone's music video Jumping Devil
Rated T for possibly unpleasant language and violence

In the small land of Zalem. Ponies yet do not know the magic of unicorns, they don't even know how such a creature should exist. Any one with this kind of power should never exist. But when ever there is one "found" it is the job of the court to take care of it.

This story contains mostly Dialogue, similar to the play it is based on.
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Cabin wood is bored, having had the career and life she hoped for, but now she wants more. She currently works at the train food business serving treats to strangers.

(If Cabin Wood's name is already someone's OC or character name, I'm sorry I didn't mean any disrespect)

There is trouble at the annual race in Canterlot. What is causing the sudden havoc? Rainbow Dash and Applejack are looking out for each other but will they be able to over come the odds? Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Twilight are cheering on.