Cross Realm Raiding
Chapter Fourteen
Wizzle awoke but he was surrounded by darkness. It was a strange darkness, one that seemed to pierce his very soul. He floated there in the space of this realm, thinking he had died. That he had gone to the underworld, after all he did betray his own people for the power of the old gods. He closed his eyes and tried to pinch himself awake, but as the pinch connected...
Creature of the world above, you have failed in the path I have laid out for you
Wizzle shot his eyes open and was face to face with... nothing...
We have been patient with you gnome, allowing for our blood to be shed for your sake
The little gnome tossed and turned trying to find the source of these voices.
BUT OUR PATIENCE IS RUNNING THIN VILE CREATION, YOU WOULD BE WISE TO HEED THIS ADVICE
A third voice rang in his ears almost deafening him.
"Wha-What would you have me to do... Dark ones?"
Be gentle brother, we do not wish to scare the young thing. He has simple tread off the path
Unfortunately for the creature, I agree with brother. His rage is not misplaced
He just need's a gentle push in the right direction
"Dark masters! What may I do to reclaim my worth to you!?"
TRAVEL TO THE CITY OF BLOOD AND IRON, LEAD THE BOISTEROUS FOOL INTO WAR!
Yes, and also go to the city of royal stone, and trick the arrogant king into our hands
But more importantly than that... take my power... of persuasion...
Wizzle felt a surging power inside of him, the power felt good, invading but...pleasurable... the love of his gods...
FAIL US AND YOU WILL BE RIPPED FROM YOUR MORTAL SHELL AND BANISHED TO THE SUNKEN CITY OF LIES!
The power overwhelming him, hurting him, ripping at his very core.
And always remember... we. are. watching.....
The darkness spiraled away from sight, but the voices rang in his head but the last thing he heard scared him more than anything had before.
Watching.....
Capitalization is the problem in this chapter. The first pink sentence, and the last two green ones. Were you half asleep when you put this up?
2645865 Thanks for the feed back man, and yeah I was a little beat getting it down. I meant to revise it but just got pulled into other things. as soon as I get a free moment I intend to go over the whole story looking for spelling errors and such, plus fixing hands into hooves and everyones into everyponies >.> but thanks again man, I will get on fixing them first chance I get