Sweetie Belle is adopted by Applejack, and finds out the hard way how strict, stern, and brutally old fashioned and superstitious the Apple Family really is.
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4227017 and you shall have it!
3986139 we dislike it because it makes up its own inane history and rules and the narrative flows ahead of all characterization. it twists and distorts everything just for the sake of darkness without having any logical reasoning behind ANY of it. put ismply nothing feels right. also the storytelling is bonkers and contrived in far too many ways. an draggin something out needlessly is just lazy. it is simply boring in the end.
also no, the elements of harmony cannot corrupt. because the only way to even USE them is to strongly represent virtues that harmony is formed by. meaning if applejack was anything like this in the series................
plot hole man, everything here is just a plot hole far as i am concerned.
4230642 god fucking damn it why do you people give my story so much attention if you don't like it??? seriously if you don't like it, don't waste your effort and go find something more to your liking and fuck off. Some people like my story, and those who do are the only ones who i am writing for at this point.
4230642 ok you idiot.....it makes sences as long as you follow along and note the tags. As long as there is an "alternate universe" tag...the story can say any thing it wants...hell, ive read a few stories on twi being celestia's birth daughter and i dont see even half of the bad shit on here said about it. If your going to crap on a story, at least read the story and tags first. Duh.
4230658 And at last she received her comeuppance. I'm really enjoying this story. Also, ignore that guy.
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If you don't like the story, then don't read it and stop ranting about how bad it is and why. Nobody cares and I like this story.
What's the problem? Just fuck off and stop bothering the writer and those who enjoy the story.
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I liked the fic, until you killed Sweets. Seriously, F No! After all you put her through, after all the hell she's been forced to live. She can't be dead and stay dead. If Sweets could bring AJ back from the dead after murder bucking her like a 2 bit whorse. Then you have to bring her back, I waited eagerly for this moment when AJ could get her comeuppance, but killing Sweets is crossing several lines if you keep her dead.
Seriously Maud should applaud Sweets for getting vengence for Pinks. Either that or with the raw Princess level magic running through her from hundreds of Unicorns, and elder-litchghost priests. Have her regenerate like Wolverine did in his X-men orgin movie, along with the short term memory loss. After all with that much raw magical force infused with her lifeforce [and her body evolved to remain healthy / strong / thrive from magic radiation], and it being princess level [since she could take a pitch fork to the face, super punch AJ, and out cast Twi and Rares together] she'd have high speed cellular regeneration [kind of like what she did to AJ but faster and for her].
Of course with a ruined brain she'd forget everything that happened for who knows how long. So that could be a good thing for her with fewer mental traumas. Worst case, she'd remember everything [like Elder Toguro from Yu Yu Hakusho], but burn out her excess magic and be a beginning spark level of magic.
4230642 lol everyone is so mad.
4230658 I think people are forgetting that this site is called "FimFiction" which means reading/writing FICTIONAL STORIES about you're favorite ponies In the My Little Pony tv series. This site never said stories have to be CANON but just related to the series in a way. If this is his fictional story and can write watever he wants to. I'm okay with the way EOH are used here and actually enjoying this story. Dislike me or watever
Nevermind the hate man. I FRAKIN LOVE DIS STORY!!! I've been reading since chapter 1 and I've seen this world you've created and love every word. Keep up the great work and stay awesome!
4253791 Oh she does...looks like I better get the next chapter out ASAP...
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Im high