Sweetie Belle is adopted by Applejack, and finds out the hard way how strict, stern, and brutally old fashioned and superstitious the Apple Family really is.
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oooh rarity
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You have come from a very long journey, and i have watched from the very first chapter, now here i am first in the line for the great shitstorm of sweet apple acres.
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Dat cliffhanger....DANG IT, now I'm excited!
That spell book sure is dicking around with sweetie belle's mind.
Also I loved the goodbye between snapper and lassy, hit me right in the feels.....Oh god he's not going to make it is he.
Alright a new chapter,... (Reads)
Dude i'm not sure what's in that Ice cap but i want some. can't wait for the next chapter, because i want to read Rarity's reaction when she finds out what's happened to her little sister.
(Rarity storms past heading for the apple farm)
Midnight: we should do something.
Midday: yes we really should. (both ponies put blast gogles on and wait to watch the fire of tartarus fly.) We should have brought pop corn.
Midnight: yes we should have.
Yay! Honorable mentions. Thanks bud. /)
The only problem I see in this chapter is that you sometimes spell Jager as Yager. Other than that, it's interesting to see what that spell book did to Sweetie Belle, and I can't wait to see what Twi's going to do since she's seen Rarity. I hope that she can warn her before leaving Ponyville because I get the feeling that if she gets stuck in Ponyville she's going to end up a snack for the Jagers.
I hope she either murders applejack or they fix her. Go Rarity Go!
P.s. screw the haters. We love you <3
how come this is the most beautiful thing i have ever seen
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3243176 long before applejack became a psycho
3243477 i see your point fair sir/ma'am but as an couter point you never specifically gave us an date this happend in pony time this is 5 years!
That might have been helpful in the first chapter.
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