Phillymetal Alchemist

by Squibdude98

CHAPTER 3:Plan B

After pinkie alerted everypony in town about Ed & Al they barely got out of the library when all the ponyratzzi came and nearly busted down the doors to see the new Alicorn. Celestia already made a announcement that there will be a interview session for them to attend, but they couldn't wait to ask there questions. They even had to get the royal guard to intercept all the ponies who got to close. Ed saw in there eyes that they would tear off anything from him, some might even take an arm and/or leg(and not just the metal ones). Luckily his jacket still fit him well enough to cover his fake limbs.When there private train car sped up to the direction of Canterlot Celestia told him some shocking news.

"When your at the press conference I want you to tell them everything,the limbs, alchemy,the human transmutation you used on your mother,everything except the other universe. Al should be fine, they wont ask him question about himself. they'll figure the armors for protection. The whole empty armor thing might scare them."she said.

"But I could get arrested, human transmutation is illegal"Ed said.
"We don't have that here so its not"said Twilight with a smile.
"Perfect" thought Ed in his head. When he got to the Canterlot Castle his mouth dropped open. He couldn't believe the size of the place. It was bigger then anywhere else he had ever been. The inside was beautifully decorated like it was a old Xing palace. When they got past the lobby, they went into the elevator(powered by magical presence)and as they went up to his sleeping quarters he saw the entirety of Canterlot (Imagine the elevator like the one in the Hunger Games movie). It was a beautiful site. "Almost as beautiful as Winry"Ed thought" OH NO Winry" he had forgotten about her and everyone else back in Central. "There probably looking for me right now".

"Don't worry time works differently in Equestria then in your universe. One year here equals a day in your world" Celestia.
Ed was about to question how she new what he was thinking, but decided that he shouldn't ask questions that he didn't want answered. When the reached his floor they showed him to his room.Al was right next door to him as he didn't want to leave him by himself. When he walked in he saw the glamorous style which normally wouldn't work for him,but he liked how they did it here. There wasn't anything to frilly and everything was quite comfortable. As soon as he fell on his bed he fell asleep.

TO BE CONTINUED IN........

The Conference

Author's Note:

Before you begin reading this(or after)I would like to thank the people who favorited my story and the people who read it all together. Thanks to you I want to write more to make everyone happy. Please tell me the problems with the story and how I can approve. I'm going to try to put these out as quick as I can so don't start spamming for the next chapter.

I just realized I never really talk about Al in this:0. I'll cover him later.

Comments

[Squibdude98]

I recommend reading silver spoons story. thats were I got a few of my ideas.

Oh I would also like your opinion if I get Ed some romance in Equestria (don't worry its not going into clop or shipping territory).

[Uberdeathninja]

MAGGOT!

[Squibdude98]

Sorry let me add this in. Please do not add complaints other people have said, please

[Squibdude98]

Everything is fixed so now you can enjoy it.

[The Brony in Denial]

Seems like youre getting somewhere, but the story is highly harsh to those who have not yet seen Full Metal, even for someone who has seen most of it I had some issues grasping everything. I do like the idea but it will need some major tweaking in story and with grammar.

For now I give it a 6/10 fix that stuff up and keep at it and I will make sure to give you a higher score.

[Squibdude98]

Dont worry im fixing that on the chapter im working on at the moment.
Just tell me your questions and Ill answer them.

[Tripl3M]

2437442
Uhm just so you know. There is this speech bubble thing in the comments, which is very useful, because with it you can reply to comments and those person will get a notification....

[Uberdeathninja]

2440521 I am without death. why would i be dead?

[Palamon]

Despite the errors I still love this because Ed is a pony. Going to keep coming back whenever you update. :3

[Uberdeathninja]

2442262
i would like to leave the fight, but i am the fight.

[Uberdeathninja]

2442379 i will find you, and i will kill you.

[Squibdude98]

2439795 Sorry still new at this.

[Tripl3M]

2443061 no problem

[Slick Ink]

I would be willing to give your story a quick check-up, if you just PM me, I'll do it. Also, probably not for a week, or two, I'm gonna be gone for a while.

[Cottonwood]

Grammar...Nazi...taking...over, so my... grammar....errors
But, can't stop reading cause I like FMA and MLP. Good story


"pssst.. if you need a proofreader, I'd be willing to help."