Can't wait to see how this goes on!

"My virgin"
Lols! Made me think of that newgrounds animation about bronies.
At the end, batman says "My ponies". Was that intended?

Also, lots o spelling mistakes in there.

Still, while it seems rather rushed, it's pretty funny.

Well this looks interesting. Will keep reading.

Very interesting

First I was like then I was like cdn02.cdn.justjared.com/wp-content/uploads/headlines/2012/08/matthew-mcconaughey-lounges-bench.jpg my curiosity is peaked

You're leaving to?!
often ended up fowling up her work

1. Too.
2. No idea if this was supposed to be a pun, but I just didn't see it fit anywhere.

2485710 Fixed! Thank you!

"My virgin"

An image of a crazy pinkie came to my mind.

Kind of like this

Ah, I see it is you, my friend, The Relaxing Fiend! No wonder this story is so well done, it has been made by you!

Hell, even if it is a clopfic, as long as it is written by the right person, then you will prosper!

Can I provide a simple photograph of what happens to Twilight and Rarity in Canterlot? Don't worry, it's SFW!

i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/5465132800/hD9E766A2/

-YNA