This has been around awhile, my first ever Fic, so excuse the crappiness of it. it was rejected out of hand by EqD, but I published to great praise on other sites, including my DA and FF.net accounts, and PonyFictionArchive. I will be adding chapters here as I get time, so please be patient.
hmmm i like it alot but i must say... you became obsesed by the power of the writers mind... saying to much power in to little time. would have loved to see him getting stronger by trying his magic... and your OC aint that far from mine... hehehe pony and dragon mix al the way dude!! W>.<W also black but mine would have a black mane with a red stroke high light... and for getting him out of the mood cueses his mane to burn yust like twi did... starting with small wings and 3 little bumps of horns who would grow in time by using magic ^///^ boy and the fitting name ''Burning Ruin''
This has been around awhile, my first ever Fic, so excuse the crappiness of it. it was rejected out of hand by EqD, but I published to great praise on other sites, including my DA and FF.net accounts, and PonyFictionArchive. I will be adding chapters here as I get time, so please be patient.
Gave it 5 stars btw.
Didn't mean to review your story or anything, its part of my nature, you can delete that thing if you wish
Kudos to you sir. This was the first fanfic i ever read and the one that got me interested in even more fics, 5 stars.
hmmm i like it alot but i must say... you became obsesed by the power of the writers mind... saying to much power in to little time.
would have loved to see him getting stronger by trying his magic... and your OC aint that far from mine... hehehe pony and dragon mix al the way dude!! W>.<W also black but mine would have a black mane with a red stroke high light... and for getting him out of the mood cueses his mane to burn yust like twi did... starting with small wings and 3 little bumps of horns who would grow in time by using magic ^///^ boy and the fitting name ''Burning Ruin''