I know you've already finished this story and probably already become a better writer and fixed this mistake. But I'll say it anyway. The conversations are sooooooo awkward. And celestia is out of character, unless it's some sort of fanon version which is completely different. Oh and WHY DOES EVERYTHING WANT TO FUCK HIM!
it only needs to be said 1s... uuhhmm... ''trollestia'' so there! its said and its past now... and love the fic dude
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I know you've already finished this story and probably already become a better writer and fixed this mistake. But I'll say it anyway. The conversations are sooooooo awkward. And celestia is out of character, unless it's some sort of fanon version which is completely different. Oh and WHY DOES EVERYTHING WANT TO FUCK HIM!