Lyra is best pony, no doubt.

this shit's cool

i like cool shit

this is like playing DoW: Retribution as a space marine and having your whole team die on Last Stand mode and then singlehandedly violating enemy wave 20 ON YOUR FUCKING OWN

lol

Hee, those last two chapters are lovely! At first heartwarming and then sexy, quite an interesting combination!

Awwwwwwh That was way to short. More horn foreplay and such. Quick write me another scene. NOOOOOOOOO it's over. :lunasad:

187250 I was writing more about the intimacy the two share rather than the act itself. Also it makes sense how short it was seeing as how Lyra had been away from Bon Bon for days and at how tired she was therefore, it wouldn't take a lot to set her off. That's why I only wrote about Bon Bon pleasuring, for the lack of a better word, Lyra. It's just the way I look at the story as a whole; this isn't some clopfic, I'm writing about a real relationship and all aspects about it as you will see in later chapters. There's going to some real emotion and real obstacles coming up so there's more to this story than the 'Mature-rated prejudice' it receives.

PS. Next chapters will be up very soon

Author deserves hugs