well lets see. Luna's already having that true immortality thing work out pretty well for her, Twilight is REALLY dumb, Coldheart is just that, and I wonder who the dragoons are gonna be. Elements of Harmony is my best guess.
So I suppose the top questions I'd have are: If Coldheart leaves that world, who raises the sun? and follow up, If she leaves the world, wouldn't the "essence of the night and day" be gone from it, prompting a new one to be made? probably not cause Luna has left hers too but whatever.
X_X look what you done! You awaken my inner imagination on Coldheart wanting to possess Luna as her own and no one else. Which in turn make an epic fight between Coldheart and Celestia! *drool* Don't mind me cause if I have a lover or am married, my partner is mine and mine alone (and vice versa at less I hope) which trigger that imagination.
Oh my this ride is going to be excellent isn't it? A parallel word with a corrupted Cadence, how delicious. Such a pity as well that Endymion lived a full life with the wrong Selene, condemning his world's love to the pits. One thing I do need to point out, the unicorn that rescued Twilight is referenced by two different names in adjoining paragraphs. You start with the name Trueblood and then it becomes Trueheart then Trueblood again. Consistency is screaming in pain.
2288732 Thanks! Her original name was Trueheart, but I changed it to Trueblood to avoid confusion with Coldheart. I thought I had found all of those and changed them, but... Thanks! Fixed now!
2288121 The Avatars of the Sun and Moon would still have a living body that they were in, so they would not be reborn if Coldheart leaves. As to the sun and moon...well, I guess we'll find out if that happens.
And what made Twilight "REALLY" dumb? I know she acted impulsively, but she's done that often.
What made her dumb was failing to ask the question "why" at multiple junctures, and not thinking about where she was. Which anyone with half a brain could see is someplace different.
And she forgot one of the rules for when you get lost (and you know someone is looking for you, and could reasonably have a good chance to find you) Stay still.
2288995 Well, I look at the first of those as being more her nerves. The second point, well, yeah, it would be smarter to stay put, but it makes for a much less interesting story...
wow interesting chapter evil alternateverse! Very creepy Coldheart, interesting stuff with Trueblood, especially that Coldheart let her go, I loved how excited she was that Luna could resist her, and the abandoned Canterlot/head wall were very creepy and atmospheric, I noticed a few spelling errors & Endymion saving the worlds seems a bit much (wait why were Celestia and Selene fighting?) but overall a very good chapter, i'm very intruiged by this alternate day/night cycle she may have made and her enslavement of Chrysalis. I can't wait to see what comes next!
If you believe in m theory then it is possible to perceive the possibility of multiple different dimensions in which we all exist but with slight alterations. Say to our hair color, personality, even gender. Or through decisions and actions made or not made by others, we never existed at all. And if you believe that inter-dimensional travel is possible with the help of spacetime shortcut called a wormhole, also called the Einstein-Rosen Bridge; then with the help of the Einstein-Rosen Bridge, in this case the wall pond, it is easy to perceive the existence of a dimension in which: Luna never existed, Cadence became evil, Chrysalis had green hair, and Prince Blueblood is Princess Trueblood.
omfg this story , the feels it makes me feel , it's almost too much to bare how can a fanfic be this good v_v??......
purposely don't want to comment on the content of the fic as i have already learned you do well with your crafting , for the most part (fuckyouforkillinglunastill) however in adression (<-is a word now deal with it) to my previous post i did not come here looking for clop but rather adventure , and boy did it deliver...... (so nastily violent though , doesn't make feel good at all.....)
Coldheart needs to die for her crime... I mean, she enslaved Chryssie, that l that's an unforgivable sin! I could stand the murder and tyranny, but harming Chryssie? That bitch!
Speaking of Twilight, she's on thin ice for hiring Chryssie too.
magic griffin--ignore the fact that there is no such thing
Silly Twilight, that's what the griffins want you to think.
Luna and Twi really need to meet up. also where's discord in all of this? please let his head be on the wall to.
well lets see. Luna's already having that true immortality thing work out pretty well for her, Twilight is REALLY dumb, Coldheart is just that, and I wonder who the dragoons are gonna be. Elements of Harmony is my best guess.
So I suppose the top questions I'd have are: If Coldheart leaves that world, who raises the sun? and follow up, If she leaves the world, wouldn't the "essence of the night and day" be gone from it, prompting a new one to be made? probably not cause Luna has left hers too but whatever.
I'm loving this new villain! Raze want's a crack at her!
X_X look what you done!
You awaken my inner imagination on Coldheart wanting to possess Luna as her own and no one else.
Which in turn make an epic fight between Coldheart and Celestia! *drool*
Don't mind me cause if I have a lover or am married, my partner is mine and mine alone (and vice versa at less I hope) which trigger that imagination.
Oh my this ride is going to be excellent isn't it? A parallel word with a corrupted Cadence, how delicious. Such a pity as well that Endymion lived a full life with the wrong Selene, condemning his world's love to the pits.
One thing I do need to point out, the unicorn that rescued Twilight is referenced by two different names in adjoining paragraphs. You start with the name Trueblood and then it becomes Trueheart then Trueblood again. Consistency is screaming in pain.
2288732 Thanks! Her original name was Trueheart, but I changed it to Trueblood to avoid confusion with Coldheart. I thought I had found all of those and changed them, but... Thanks! Fixed now!
2288121 The Avatars of the Sun and Moon would still have a living body that they were in, so they would not be reborn if Coldheart leaves. As to the sun and moon...well, I guess we'll find out if that happens.
And what made Twilight "REALLY" dumb? I know she acted impulsively, but she's done that often.
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What made her dumb was failing to ask the question "why" at multiple junctures, and not thinking about where she was. Which anyone with half a brain could see is someplace different.
And she forgot one of the rules for when you get lost (and you know someone is looking for you, and could reasonably have a good chance to find you) Stay still.
2288995 Well, I look at the first of those as being more her nerves. The second point, well, yeah, it would be smarter to stay put, but it makes for a much less interesting story...
wow interesting chapter evil alternateverse! Very creepy Coldheart, interesting stuff with Trueblood, especially that Coldheart let her go, I loved how excited she was that Luna could resist her, and the abandoned Canterlot/head wall were very creepy and atmospheric, I noticed a few spelling errors & Endymion saving the worlds seems a bit much (wait why were Celestia and Selene fighting?) but overall a very good chapter, i'm very intruiged by this alternate day/night cycle she may have made and her enslavement of Chrysalis. I can't wait to see what comes next!
2290208 Well, the Endymion story isn't done. Which includes the Celestia/Selene issue. So, hopefully you'll like where that goes.
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Thanks for the rely! I am very interested to see where it goes and i'm sure i'll like it!
Yay! A new chapter! I cannot wait to read it! However, I must.
Oh Luna you cant help but travel to different realms.
If you believe in m theory then it is possible to perceive the possibility of multiple different dimensions in which we all exist but with slight alterations. Say to our hair color, personality, even gender. Or through decisions and actions made or not made by others, we never existed at all. And if you believe that inter-dimensional travel is possible with the help of spacetime shortcut called a wormhole, also called the Einstein-Rosen Bridge; then with the help of the Einstein-Rosen Bridge, in this case the wall pond, it is easy to perceive the existence of a dimension in which: Luna never existed, Cadence became evil, Chrysalis had green hair, and Prince Blueblood is Princess Trueblood.
SOMEONE STOP HER BEFORE SHE KILLS CELESTIA...AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!
omfg this story , the feels it makes me feel , it's almost too much to bare
how can a fanfic be this good v_v??......
purposely don't want to comment on the content of the fic as i have already learned you do well with your crafting , for the most part (fuckyouforkillinglunastill)
however in adression (<-is a word now deal with it) to my previous post i did not come here looking for clop but rather adventure , and boy did it deliver......
(so nastily violent though , doesn't make feel good at all.....)
Coldheart needs to die for her crime... I mean, she enslaved Chryssie, that l that's an unforgivable sin! I could stand the murder and tyranny, but harming Chryssie? That bitch!
Speaking of Twilight, she's on thin ice for hiring Chryssie too.
Silly Twilight, that's what the griffins want you to think.
Cya
Raziel-chan