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“Simple: Fantasia is my mother. I’m her daughter,” Trueblood explained.

Twilight blinked several times.

“I’m sorry, what now?”

excuse me?...
Im confused....
BUT!
I love you <3
I was some time Ill and could go on FiM soo I didnt see this piece of Art
Tahnk you :D

Dear god this story is like crack in word form, I must keep coming back for more. Your writing remains superb, the more information given the more questions I end up asking. Brilliant! I want to hate you for cliffhangers, I really do but I can't bring myself to. Guess all I've got left is the edge of my seat until the next chapter is posted.

Cheers Nom, you magnificent bastard you!

Wow very interesting chapter! Hmm Spike seems very hostile I wonder if he's going to try something he'll regret later? Cool little crew Trueblood has going there (I figured she'd be related to royalty, but Fantasia's daughter, that did surprise me, well it was a secondary guess on my part) i'm guessing they are to play the new Elements (Gilda honesty)? It'll be interesting to see these two worlds go to war, especially with multiple Cadence's, I wonder if Celestia has figured out a means of helping her Cadence deal with the problem she is having. The dragoons were brilliantly described, and their creation completely nightmarish, though why were only stallons picked, excluding Big Mac and SH most stallions seem to be more or less the same size of mares? I liked the scene with Chrysalis and Fantasia and the added background it gives to them and their relationships and it's an interesting idea to have an allied changeling, I liked the use of Husk and Ditsy. I'm guessing Fantasia is collecting her soldiers either to specifically capture the princess's or to test the waters of the other world. Anyway looking forward to the next one!

This series is awesome, keep it up

Rock on! A new chapter! Must read!

Another great chapter! I especially loved Gilda's "how I met Trueblood" story. aka "Robin Hood meets Little John"

...Uh, what? You had to leave us hanging then!

i saw trueblood's identity reveal a couple lines away , but as they say , the plot thickens , although it was already thick enough for me to cut with a brick....

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and after having the chance to sleep on it i came up with a bunch more stuff i wanted to address about everything that had happened so far , let's see if i can remember them all....

im sure the story will already have answers for everything im pondering , and which considering it's already finished makes it silly for me to say lings like if the magic of friendship doesn't solve all the problems here im going to be very disappoint , if that and if nightmarity doesn't make an appearance , but im pretty sure this was finished long before that became a thing in the comics.....

sooo like how was luna just able to not even care about fantasia's manipulation magic? just alicorn status? mmm no that can't be it since i recall her saying she influenced celestia......

oh yes and what what's his name already brought up in concern with , wasn't it made clear that the sun and the moon need separate physical arbiters for them? so then what's the deal with fantasia?....
not only is she not 2 ponies as far as we know , but she's also not immortal ,or at least she's not supposed to be.....

are we also going to get an answer for gilda's back story for trueblood's appearance in it?.....

man , this rallies up so many emotions about the so far mentioned tragedies , and here i am whining about it in an online comment while the current state of our world is hardly any better , but this rallies up so many thoughts previously had , about authority figures or 'masters' and general mean/assholyness , basically the thoughts include inserting myself or another character with my reasoning into any of the relative scenarios and trying to reason deal with out wit and settle any problems with those jerks , even putting myself in that confrontation with chrysalis expressing my gravenesses for that tragedies that have already happened and trying to convince her to ally with us and become a spy for the resistance.....
another character that's given me these thoughts is that master trainer from kill bill , god what a pompous asshole he is , but he at least didn't slaughter whole races like fantasia did , being so stupidly op and manipulating everyone literally making it so anyone left can't refuse her demands , i even came to a thought that the extraterrestrials that are no doubt monitoring the status of our planet right now might be using us in a similar fashion , not through direct manipulation but simply observing and learning from our behavioral patterns , although since i can't fathom a reason to do so or even wanting to do so (hm maybe aside form alleviating some boredom , like that south park's episode take on the idea) so i find that unlikely , still though i called them fucking assholes if that were the case lol.....

oh this would actually be a good place to ask , you or someone here know the name of that fanfic that about a different mane6 which you've already used most of the characters from for this?.....

ok let's see i had 7+1 things to mention and im pretty sure i just wrote down a couple more already.........ok 7 so far.....

ah yes , and i'll close out with mentioning , you just made luna die from a couple in room lightning bolts -.o? i thought these alicorns crashing through buildings and brushing off magic energy blasts were a little tougher than that?.....

oh oh oh oh i almost forgot

I HAVE RETURNED
RECEIVING
AWAITING INSTRUCTIONS
TRANSMIT
INPUT COMMAND
THERE ARE HOSTILES?
MAKE USE OF ME
I AM NEEDED?
CONFIRMED
INITIATED
COMMENCING

if the dragoons in this don't say all that i will be very heart broken.....

Go away, Spike.

Fantasia needs to die horribly. Not only did she hurt and keeps hurting Chryssie, but she also murdered countless changelings and griffons.

And of course Twilight and Luna fucked it up for the poor griffon.

What's Twilight's problem work griffons?

Cya
Raziel-chan