Hey everypony. My name is Khakispony And I'm delighted you've decided to read my story. First I'd like to apologize for any grammatical errors I've made. I'm no English professor, and have probably missed a lot of commas and other errors. Rest assured I will fix them as I encounter them but until then please be patient. Second I know the chapter ended sort of abruptly. The reason is so I can edit the story in manageable chunks. If I didn't stop it here the chapter would probably be about 10.000 words long and an absolute nightmare to edit. So again I will have to ask you to be patient if you really want to know what happens you'll just have to wait. Third thing I did like is for you to state your opinions. This is my first story and I'm still getting the hang of this. So if you think there needs to be more detail, less detail, or anything else I'll receive your critiques with open arms. That being said please keep it civil. I'm not going to respond if your comment goes like "OMG you suck LOL go kill yourself." Anyways thanks again for reading and have a nice day.

Loving it.

So far this is a very interesting story now if you would be so kind, as to pick up that golf club.......

Thanks you guys. The fact that it's getting such good feedback, is more than enough reason to keep making it. Still this will take some time, so at best expect bi-weekly updates.

Would you kindly write more? I cant wait for pony cohen!

I would very kindly kick your plot you bad bad bad pony!!!

Such a wonderful twist in a game. I was like and then I was all and then I totally went all on his cooky backside.

As for the story, a few mistakes here or there but hay, you should see my first attempt at writing, I believe my pre readers and editors said, "Kills it with fire!!"

I'm looking forward to more chapters so yes please. Moar.

Also, I should likely not post while half asleep...