Why would we beat you to death over a small amount of sex? You are trying to tell a story here, dood; not throw us smut all the time like the ponysex is meat and we are all carnivores and if you don't give us enough sex we'll eat you alive.

That's barbaric, dood. Do what you do, it's a fine chapter.

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I know you wouldn't, but others might, you never really know.

Well, assuming Twilight ever does become Immortal (really it's up in the air, I've seen people who've done it both ways, and both have their merits and downfalls; both are quite interesting in their own rights) It'll be interesting seeing her be protective of Celestia since she'd probably be the one that was impregnated.

No lesbian pony sex? *sighs* ok

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It will be, but could you imagine the mood swings Celestia would be going through.

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Hey they were having a lovey dovey moment, sex comes next chapter.

2503260 not to mention if Celestia starts to backseat drive the sun while Twilight takes it over

the longer the wait the better the sex will be

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More to the left more to the left!

LET ME DRIVE!

and woe to all the cakes once Celestia's food cravings kick in.

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Oh you will only have to wait as long as Celestia will have to, the poor dear.

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"Don't make me turn this celestial body around! "

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I was just trying to be helpful! and now I'm hungry, get me a bucket of ice.

2503824 It's done, dood. A proof-reader is looking at it...I hope.

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I'm working on it ok, I had to finish this first. And I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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I realize, but be prepared, the next chapter is going to be a bombshell.

So are we gonna get alicorn babies or what? Don't tell me you include a book on it and then don't deliver. So the 'male' does she grew to something like if Big Mac or Snowflake became an alicorn? That would be funny if Twilight became that.

Twilight Smash, puny ponies! YEEARH!

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Yes their will be alicorn babies, just not yet, that will come in another book.

as for size, think more along the lines of size comparison between Celestia and Luna, Twilight will be bigger then Celestia by about that much.

the suspense is killing me, get to the baby making

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Patients young one they will get to it, just not this book.

Oh yeah, a new Chapter!

So! I read something of Size change, depending on the type of relationship. What does this mean for Twilight then? Sounds for me like Celesta will be soon smaller than Twilight....or something!

Please, continue!

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Yes, Twi will be bigger then Celestia, like how Celestia is bigger then Luna.

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Ha, I really like this Idea! This gonna be awesome!

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Of coarse with the Princess pregnant Equestria will probably go through many a major hurtle.

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Well, some Trouble come always.
Let see how both handle the Future!

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and woe to all the cake in the kingdom.....

Awwwww! Can't wait to see them get married (and have foals, will be so cute! )

Magnifying Twi's power tenfold? You play a dangerous game methinks, Feudra

Not nearly as many errors this time around Fuedra! Good job!

Alicorn Matting and Reproduction

Mating has one 't' in it.

Divine alicorns cannot bread with the other races by normal means. Even the mortal alicorns, as mysterious a race as their Divine counterparts, can bread with other races,

'breed', not 'bread'. Though, something is being put into an 'oven' in both situations... (oh god why did I make that joke?)

their sexual apatite increases exponentially.

'appetite'.

suddenly ask to have a role in they hay,

'roll' in 'the' hay.

complying with your mates desires.

Possession here. 'mate's desires'

also be potential dangerous,

'potentially' dangerous.

unlike unicorns, Alicorn sifts don’t just

'shifts'.

I hope this has helped you better understand the divine alicorns a bit better in regards to their matting habits.

Another mating switch. Also remove the 'a bit better' after the word 'alicorns', as it's repeating what was said earlier in the sentence.

version of Twilights Cutie Mark

Possession here. Twilight's Cutie Mark

nipping her before your fist time. You have loved this mare for longer then you care to admit,

'first' time. Depending on how it's done, 'fist time'... nope. Not even gonna try to finish that joke. Also 'then' should be 'than'. Then refers to a point in time, than is a comparison word, to use an example: go with this rather than that ratty old thing.

On the chapter itself.

Another good update, and some great background/lore for this 'verse (whatever it might be called, personally I'm voting for 'Truthverse' after the main story's title, 'Truth Behind Harmony')

D'awww.

well not only that... you know you could in theory bend canon with the story and create a very nice little alibi about how she gets all this other power.

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I will get on those strait away.

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XD I didnt even think about that, but yeah it works....some what.

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I play many a dangerous game, always with my foot on the razors edge.

2507618 but yeah think on it.. the ultimate alibi oh the Elements did it... they all saw it happen ask them... no one will ever know. at least till they decide to go public. anyway I like the story so far can't wait to see what happens next.

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I can just imagine the news on that.

Princess Celestia Pregnant: Twilight Sparkle the father, the story tonight at five!

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I ask myself, how other would react by this sudden change! I mean, Cadance was nearly going through the roof, as she running into Celestia and Twilight during her naughty games.

How would she react then, when Twilight, who was not long ago a bit shorter than her, would soon towering over her Aunt! I image that would be hillarious!

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Plus I can't get this seen out of my head when she changes.

Twilight their was no reason to hit that guard!

He was staring at your ass!

Everypony stares at my ass Twilight its only natural!

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XD funny.

I'm think your mix of sex and Reality is great