This was great one, I'm not a big Fluttershy fan, but I did enjoy this "Mama Fluttershy" stuff quite a lot. As usual, the dirty talk is just scrumptious, really helps push these stories further into their own filth. I really like how you guys kind of broke her up into two here. Her mind was still somewhat bashful during the whole event while her body fulfilled it's needs; leading to her melding with her body's desire gradually as it went on. Nice touch.
Regardless, Kudos for making me feel dirty. Mama Sluttershy is 3rd best pone.
Also, I'm not sure if I should praise the inclusion of actual penetration or knock it because, well, ya know. Either way, I was SO fucking happy it was here. That was a nice and GREAT surprise for these fics (I still hope you'll release a sequel fic mirroring each chapter but featuring some hardcore pony fucking. But this is fine too.) .
the mare licks her lips as she watches her wings gHer humantown on the human.
Needs cleanup, pals.
Golden Dildo was not wasted. Looking forward to the next, I don't even mind the wait!
Also, as an actual RESPONSE to your comment for once, I'll just say that some chapters have more than others. It really has nothin to do with favoritism, just how much we like a concept and what mood we're in when writing it. "Mama Fluttershy" just so happened to be one of the best ones.
Also, we have some time to make these more frequent, but unfortunately, we're going to do entire re-do's of two big ones we did because they came across as TOO self-insert-esque (specifically, Rainbow Dash and AJ), so even though their old ones are finished, we don't think they're really good enough to post, so we're skipping 'em.
Still, next one's still pretty good, and is lot shorter.
This was a very bold chapter. Good interaction between the characters, and not just in the physical sense.
those were alot of pretty words
This was an awesome chapter who are you writing about next?
ps. maybe cheerilee or applejack?
Probably one of the best chapters so far, well after the Rarity one.
Oh god, unf...
This was great one, I'm not a big Fluttershy fan, but I did enjoy this "Mama Fluttershy" stuff quite a lot. As usual, the dirty talk is just scrumptious, really helps push these stories further into their own filth. I really like how you guys kind of broke her up into two here. Her mind was still somewhat bashful during the whole event while her body fulfilled it's needs; leading to her melding with her body's desire gradually as it went on. Nice touch.
Regardless, Kudos for making me feel dirty. Mama Sluttershy is 3rd best pone.
Also, I'm not sure if I should praise the inclusion of actual penetration or knock it because, well, ya know. Either way, I was SO fucking happy it was here. That was a nice and GREAT surprise for these fics (I still hope you'll release a sequel fic mirroring each chapter but featuring some hardcore pony fucking. But this is fine too.) .
Needs cleanup, pals.
Golden Dildo was not wasted. Looking forward to the next, I don't even mind the wait!
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Exo: Haha, holy fuck I left that there.
edit: fixed
Thanks again, man
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Also, as an actual RESPONSE to your comment for once, I'll just say that some chapters have more than others. It really has nothin to do with favoritism, just how much we like a concept and what mood we're in when writing it. "Mama Fluttershy" just so happened to be one of the best ones.
Also, we have some time to make these more frequent, but unfortunately, we're going to do entire re-do's of two big ones we did because they came across as TOO self-insert-esque (specifically, Rainbow Dash and AJ), so even though their old ones are finished, we don't think they're really good enough to post, so we're skipping 'em.
Still, next one's still pretty good, and is lot shorter.
I cant decide between this and the Luna part of the other chapter...
A great chapter very well writen.
Only one problem, althogh this is probably more me.
Having seen "A Very Potter Sequel" a bit to many times, I atomaticly think of Umbridge who in the play calls herself 'Mama' all the time.
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Main problem is I'm still turned on.
Well written.
And congats,
you have once again made my manly bits shoot off my body like a fucking rocketI mean damn that was good.I would want to slap Celestia for classifying me as an animal
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???: Wipe that smug smirk off her face.
delicious ^_^
I do believe the word potent was intended for this space good sir.