This was pretty goddamn hot, the dirty talk was fantastic. Wonderfully detailed and just plain dirty (Mind-broken Celly is best pony now.), I will pop many boners to this for a long time coming. I'm loving this series. I'm hoping there's a CheeriSuck chapter somewhere down the line..
I'll be honest, when I saw the Princess Luna tag, I was SURE Luna was doing the whole telepathic talk. Wouldn't THAT be a twist?
Anyway, great chapter, Exo, but... I suppose something's grown inside of me, and that is intolerance to self-insert stories. I'm not saying Alex or Walter were, indeed, self-inserts, but I'm sure you can understand why someone'd think that, right?
Guess I'm just too used to AiE (Anonymous in Equestria - /mlp/), which uses a fixed name for all its protagonists (Anonymous).
That doesn't mean, of course, that this was actually really well-written. Nice job, Exo. ...And [Censored].
Dude, by all means, please despise these writings based on stupid ideas we make up revolving around badly inserted humans and ponies. I won't defend these at all because you're right on the money with that one
Thanks for the last-minute compliment, though, even though it wasn't necessary
Praise the sun for a new chapter! /SunBrony
This was pretty goddamn hot, the dirty talk was fantastic. Wonderfully detailed and just plain dirty (Mind-broken Celly is best pony now.), I will pop many boners to this for a long time coming. I'm loving this series. I'm hoping there's a CheeriSuck chapter somewhere down the line..
I'll be honest, when I saw the Princess Luna tag, I was SURE Luna was doing the whole telepathic talk.
Wouldn't THAT be a twist?
Anyway, great chapter, Exo, but...
I suppose something's grown inside of me, and that is intolerance to self-insert stories. I'm not saying Alex or Walter were, indeed, self-inserts, but I'm sure you can understand why someone'd think that, right?
Guess I'm just too used to AiE (Anonymous in Equestria - /mlp/), which uses a fixed name for all its protagonists (Anonymous).
That doesn't mean, of course, that this was actually really well-written. Nice job, Exo.
...And [Censored].
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Oh, there will be some of that later~
Dude, by all means, please despise these writings based on stupid ideas we make up revolving around badly inserted humans and ponies. I won't defend these at all because you're right on the money with that one
Thanks for the last-minute compliment, though, even though it wasn't necessary
You know how annoying it is to try and sleep when you can't roll over because you left your kickstand up?
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I hate that. I wind up having to beat it into submission.
Celestia X Human?! HELL YEAH!
another chapter
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I can't tell if that praise the sun comment at the end is a dark souls sunbro reference or not either way fantastic work
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???: It is.
Exo: Confirmed for Brawl
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE ACTUAL FUCK-wait, this is ponysuck not pony fuck.... my bad
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Some longer chapters have that, you'll just have to wait and see
I get it: you 2 are Changelings. That explains it all
Oh Celestia clop... It's glorious. If only I could be so grossly incandescent...
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Exo: While some consider it a blessing, others would consider it a curse
???: But mostly it's a blessing
So haaaaaaawt