I swear; I spend a solid week or two actually writing a chapter, then an obsessively long time re-reading, re-writing and going over it with a fine tooth comb and I still always miss the silliest little things like that.
2774553 Happens to all of us. Even so its a great chapter Somehow I knew Stormy was gonna turn out to be a jerk. Hopefully Piper steps up to the plate in the near future.
I'm still holding out for a White Mane and Piper cameo next season. It won't happen, but I'd give off a girlish squeal if there was a pinto stallion and a girlish looking golden coated colt in the background, sipping tea and holding hooves.
If there's a Piper and White Mane cameo I'll lose my shit. I will be flailing at the windows and screaming at passerby and hurling tomatoes at cars driving by.
Awesome chapter, as usual But, being French, I found this chapter's title disturbing, in french "The end of the world" is "La fin du monde". I don't mean to be annoying or anything, I'm just sayin'
This is one of the few stories I read that I absolutely adore. Yet I can't demand another chapter. It's just so amazing. There aren't many good coltcuddler stories out there, this is the only one I like. I also hate OCs, but these ones I do not mind! It's well written and doesn't reek of the person touch of a self insert! To make a long, long, long story short, I love, love, love this!
Woo! Go get 'im, Piper
so awesome
Poor colt, that White Mane... But it looks like things will go better from here.
This was yet another great chapter, I look forward to the next ^_^
Wouldn't that be Sunny Side? Not Scout? Just pointing it out
need another chapter please!!!
Aw yeah!
"with whipped cream and sprinkles."
oh my gosh that was just the best cap ever, ever.
love this story. but you knew that
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I swear; I spend a solid week or two actually writing a chapter, then an obsessively long time re-reading, re-writing and going over it with a fine tooth comb and I still always miss the silliest little things like that.
Good eye though. I'll fix it up right away.
2774553 Happens to all of us. Even so its a great chapter
Somehow I knew Stormy was gonna turn out to be a jerk. Hopefully Piper steps up to the plate in the near future.
this has been my fav story for like ever!
Cute!
PIPER IS BEST PONY! Cannot say it enough.
Also: Oh, White Mane . . .
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I'm still holding out for a White Mane and Piper cameo next season. It won't happen, but I'd give off a girlish squeal if there was a pinto stallion and a girlish looking golden coated colt in the background, sipping tea and holding hooves.
...a guy can dream.
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If there's a Piper and White Mane cameo I'll lose my shit. I will be flailing at the windows and screaming at passerby and hurling tomatoes at cars driving by.
Okay, I'll probably just pee a little. But still!
Awesome chapter, as usual
But, being French, I found this chapter's title disturbing, in french "The end of the world" is "La fin du monde".
I don't mean to be annoying or anything, I'm just sayin'
Blargh Piper's too good for White Mane blargh
I just want to say, I usually don't like OC stories, but I absolutely love this!!!! Keep it coming my friend! You have talent!!
Mmmh cliff hangers, this is an awesome story i am impatiently waiting for MOAR
This is one of the few stories I read that I absolutely adore. Yet I can't demand another chapter. It's just so amazing. There aren't many good coltcuddler stories out there, this is the only one I like. I also hate OCs, but these ones I do not mind! It's well written and doesn't reek of the person touch of a self insert! To make a long, long, long story short, I love, love, love this!
20 dollars says Vincent will pick up mares before Scout does, and end up kicking Scout out a few times. That'd be funny.
I would be forever in your debt to see this story continued, my goodness.
Excellent read.