On a school trip to a quaint little town, Sweetie Belle becomes entangled in the past. She soon learns that some stories infect everything they touch, like a virulent plague, creating sad, twisted clones of themselves. And they never truly die.
2197181 Also, I feel the next update will lead to Sweetie Belle having nightmares, (P.L.'s intrusions notwithstanding), but alas, it is not my story, so I gallantly await thy next update, brave knight!
This one made me shiver. Great job scaring me with that disembodied green voice!
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Thanks! I wasn't sure if that part worked quite like it did in my own mind, so I'm glad to hear you liked it
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Also, I feel the next update will lead to Sweetie Belle having nightmares, (P.L.'s intrusions notwithstanding), but alas, it is not my story, so I gallantly await thy next update, brave knight!
Much better. I think you really nailed the CMC in this chapter.
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Glad to hear it
I don't like that house. ._.
Also, why do I have the sneaking suspicion that green light is "Gray"?
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Aww, but the house likes you
I don't know why you'd think that