Um if you can, please continue, it's okay if you don't but I would like it to continue

please continue this story. . . the love needs to be expanded upon. them having a foal, or something. idk i just wanted to put in a random suggestion

I forgot to say nice story

I think it would be nice if you wrote an epilog where Thunderlane jumps a picket fence and ALMOST makes it over .

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It was certainly an interesting story. Continuing now would be appreciated, but I can understand that it'd be quite hard as well (pun not intended)

You've wrapped it up nicely. A closed ending. They're together and things will be alright. He's cut his ties with his family and the big city and the farm is back with the Apple family once more.

Continuing from this point on would be difficult, since most chapters now would be more like one-shots. However, those can be fun to read as well. Something like a small tiff between Rainbow and AJ about that night that Rainbow and him shared? Or him finding out about what AJ did to Thunderlane, finding it unfair for Thunderlane to have taken advantage and going to look for him to talk to him sternly? (yeah right, "talk")

All in all, an awesome story that I truly enjoyed reading ^_^ Just one thing. Hoofs? Hooves" Sorry, just had to do it x3

Yours truly -

Sugarcube

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Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, there isn't really too much hope for any in-depth continuation of this story. I was thinking of maybe doing a short chapter revolving around AJ and RD, but we'll see...

And thank you for catching that mistake! Fixed now.

I would like you to continue this story just because, in my opinion, it's not that satisfying an ending. I understand if you don't want to continue this story, but the ending was enough to satiate my reading.

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I'm not fond of the ending either, I just lost motivation to continue it plus I don't really know which direction to take it. Like I said, suggestions are always welcome, as shown by chapter 2.5

Well done!! This story was great, I'm happy with the way things turned out in the end. If you do decide to expand on this in any way I would recommend that you write a whole other story instead of adding more chapters to this.

After reading the whole story I have to say that AppleJack was never betrayed. Even if she was giving hoofjobs and blowjobs in the hospital for a month she still never changed answer. Therefore she wasn't betrayed when he/you got with Rainbow Dash.

why don't you give them kids

Ah man I would really like to see this continue on! I mean we do not even know how it resolves between him and his father! Or at the very least an epilogue of pinkies party that wraps everything up nice and neat. Maybe a Pinkie Pie Welcome back party that also announces AJ and Silverwings relationship that is crashed by his father trying to put a stop to the whole ordeal and take his son back home, that all ends with father and son becoming closer and Silverwing Sr. becoming a grandfather?

Do I dare read this?

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Silverwings????

I thought his name is Thunderlane?

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Silverwing is your (the character's) last name. The first name is really up to you...

Thunderlane is the unfortunate background pony that I selected to take advantage of AJ.

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Bad Thunderlane, bad.

I don't know the correct image for this..........

2303599 i agree i want to see this story continued. the points you suggested are greatly accepted by me personally

2383762 why thank you!

It could be better, but all in all, it was a pretty badass ending.

One of the best Clopfics i have ever read,
is part 7 the end? Or came another parts in the Future?

Greetings from germany

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There will be more chapters. The story is currently on hiatus due to other projects going on.

Foals make things ugly. And complicated. You would probably have to turn up the ages, then the foal description, and I must've forgot something.

It's touching
It's HOT
And I fucking love it
Cannot wait for the ending

It looks like all's well that ends well, but I have to ask: There has to be someone in Fillydelphia other than the ponies that was in Twilight's library that realized what Silverwing did--basically disowned himself from his money-grubbing parents--to save his new girlfriend's home and livelihood.

There has to be some sort of continuation, does Silverwing's parents come to Ponyville to doublecross him and try to take the farm back? What about his original fabrication to make it so that Applejack owns her own farm and therefore, possible protect them from being razed? How about Silverwing does figure out a way that makes Sweet Apple Acres actually pretty profitable so that the quality is still there, as well as still allowing them to produce those exclusive items, like their Zap Apple Jam?

MOAR, I tell you, MOAR!!!!!!

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Agreed! MOAR!!

"But how in the hay did ya'll manage to afford to pay so darn much for the farm?" Applejack wondered. "There's no way even Celestia could just come up with that kinda money!"

Uh... Bullshit.
She rules the goddamn country.
Technically speaking, all of its wealth belongs to her.

As a side-note, the main character should have brought up to the board the fact that razing the land that Celestia herself gave to the Apple family—which is currently operated by a national hero and personal friend of the aforementioned ruler of the country—would be an unfathomably stupid idea.