I'm impressed with the developments you've made so far. I honestly thought this story was going to be a crap-shoot but it seems I was wrong. Amazing work!

This story is turning out very good. I am enjoying it greatly!

Hmm..........

In my mind I heard "What ya gonna do is what you wanna do row row fight the power!

Why didn't the main character just tell his father that the reason why they took out the loan in the first place was to pay for his medical expenses? His father probably would have been a lot more cooperative about giving the Apples a break.