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Currently reading through Luck. Haven't got a great deal to say about this so far. Not in the bad way, it just hasn't really kicked my mind into order with much to say - and the few things I could say I've already mentioned so there's no point in repeating myself.
It's a good fic. I'm picky about grammar and such so that's the only thing that really catches my attention to be honest. Not a huge problem though :)
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Thanks! I hope you like it in terms of story and stuff. I will be writing chapter 9 slightly different just to mix up my writing and to test my hand at a semi-new style. Oh and me and my proofread will go over those chapters soon.
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yeah, I like the story. it's going well so far. I just haven't had much to say about it for some reason, which is weird, but its good.
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Yay I have the proper response for her! She has that personality where you don't really like her and she's a complete jerk, but in an almost funny way.
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Thanks for pointing out the errors, I have to say even I my proofreaders miss some stuff. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and when I created Ironhoof city I suspected someone else had the same name for a base or town etc. Just note, if you plan to read further that past chapter 2 it has not been looked over by any proofreaders yet. I plan to go over those chapters sometime soon. Thanks very very very much for the comment!
*Edit* For the first 2 chapters or so it seems like he's the narrator because he's alone, though once he's with Adam it stray's towards both of them. Yes, I understand the age, with stallions/mares and once again I need to fix it, that and several other typos Kippershy has pointed out.
357213 Ok, just wanted to make sure you were aware of those errors, and I was actually saying that 2 of the errors were from previous chapters, I've read up to "Ground Level"
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Wow, your fast... So far people have liked that chapter a whole lot.
357253 I've mostly been reading from my 3ds for the past couple weeks, mostly when I haven't had much to do and been away from my computer. When at my computer most of the time I've been working on my story, or my Minecraft texture pack(Digimon Themed)
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Haha, that makes sense.
I'll keep my eyes on this one. I'm liking this.
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Thanks! I hope you'll enjoy it!