Yeah this chapter really confused me as to Quill's character. He seems to be all over the place and not very consistent with who we were introduce to previously. Was hard to finish this chapter.
I liked this part(and the parts before this of course) Just wanted to bring to your attention that there is a mistake here "“What’s your name cutie?” she asks, a familiar slur in her voice. You could tell you could tell she was probably a bit inebriated."
(there are other minor mistakes in the writing but normally I don't really mind them enough to bring them to attention, but I thought you might want to fix something major like this)
I kinda find it impossible to believe that a pony liking opera is that funny... not that this is going to change, but it feels like this chapter took a hit in quality.
So Quill seems to have a certain liking for the "plot" of the story,
AKA
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I don't know about this one, seems a little rushed.
Just remember to take your time. (and watch those commas)
Wow, can't wait for what's next keep it up!!! *on a side note, there's some misspellings nothing big though*
This is Delicious!
Poor Quill... Nobody likes opera
Yeah this chapter really confused me as to Quill's character. He seems to be all over the place and not very consistent with who we were introduce to previously. Was hard to finish this chapter.
... *Grinning like a Cheshire Cat*
YES! A 'me' that likes Opera?! Finally! I mean, admittedly, I like musicals, not operas so much, but still! *Rushes to read next chapter*
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
I liked this part(and the parts before this of course)
Just wanted to bring to your attention that there is a mistake here
"“What’s your name cutie?” she asks, a familiar slur in her voice. You could tell you could tell she was probably a bit inebriated."
(there are other minor mistakes in the writing but normally I don't really mind them enough to bring them to attention, but I thought you might want to fix something major like this)
I kinda find it impossible to believe that a pony liking opera is that funny... not that this is going to change, but it feels like this chapter took a hit in quality.