You'd think they would be clever enough to not let that film ON Photo Finish's desk. Oh, well, that can only mean we're up for some pretty funny and sassy shenanigans in the following update So, I'll not complain much about it... Heck I'll not complain at all
Dammit! I would have gotten away with it if it wasn't for this pesky editor of mine unravelling my carefully laid plans! I even had a scary mask and everything so no one would know it was me!
3564367 Hey, I just said we know how you write and that is how you will write it (plus, how everything is going, and what they were talking about doing, we can assume fairly well).
Well then... If you want longer chapters, then get your butt over here and start writing!
Though I hope everybody's going to love the new chapter I'm doing, it is finally time for the dinner to commence! So I might be able to work a joke or two in their... maybe... don't hold your breath though!
No, not per say, it's been hinted at once or twice, but this is the first time Fiddlesticks says that clearly. She has for example mentioned before that Kazooie and her aren't really having to much sex anymore. But still... yeah it would be kind of a bummer knowing your wife's gonna screw her sister and her marefriend and not get any action there at all!
3564879 It's "butt," short for "buttocks." I figured it was just a typo when I saw that mistake in the chapter, but seeing you repeat the mistake in the comments... And the phrase is, "Oh the humanity!"
3565328 thank for replying. I've always found that most authors go the route of "I'll screw someone else and not think a thing of it" It's good to see someone write a character that still wants to try and fix things instead of the usual. Things like that usually turn me off of a fic, but its great that your taking it in a direction other than what most people do, it shows good character development.
Sexy times ensue as we watch the three head into the shower! ...Or there's a giant tentacle monster in there...or maybe it's an alien trying to abduct them! ...No, it's Pinkie Pie. Definitely Pinkie Pie. No matter what it is, Pinkie is just disguised as what's in the shower. My hypothesis for the next chapter isn't off, right?
Hehe... I just might, of course if there is anypony out there who wants to run with that idea then they are most welcome to do so. Who knows... might even be your first story Bowow.
So if somepony does end up making a version of this idea that fits into A Different Kind of Music's story-line then I'll link to it from this story as a little extra bonus incentive for you creative masses out there. Just like it did for psp7master's funny side story about The Adventures of Sir Morning Glory the Dildo. Even though it didn't fit into the contingency of A Different Kind of Music... it was definitely worth a link or two.
Wait, what? You make a jok and it turns into reality.... Well, at least we know that it will be funny! ...And you're going to write the next chapter soon, right?
Well I wouldn't call it my first story, my first clop story would be more accurate. If I ever wanted to be the one to write it anyway. I just don't think I'm good enough at writing to try my hoof at some clop just yet
And yes I've read it, definitely one to read if somepony hasn't already.
Look, Fiddles, it's not like you think, really; and I thought you did to...
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I think about Octavia’s sexy but all the time.
I think about her sexy butt as well.
“Damn… I missed out, didn’t I?” Vinyl whispered to herself. Although, she couldn’t remember ever having seen a Filly Scout with a sex badge on her vest. Plus, wouldn’t there be more parental outcries if that was the case? And definitely more volunteers.
Wow, that’s a creepy thought… as if the scouts don’t have enough problems with those kinds of accusations already, Vinyl mused to herself.
That reads like it was all supposed to be part of the same paragraph, with everything after the dialogue being in Vinyl-musing-italics.
Oh god. Oh god. Oh god...
Fiddle, Octavia... How I pity you. Photo Finish is going to see you two making out! xD (That is what I think those pictures are)
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I think they may be more... provocative than that (don't know for sure).
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...
I think there's one other... "option." And it involves Fiddlesticks showing "something"
XD Oh, this is so awesome!
You'd think they would be clever enough to not let that film ON Photo Finish's desk.
Oh, well, that can only mean we're up for some pretty funny and sassy shenanigans in the following update
So, I'll not complain much about it... Heck I'll not complain at all
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You two just have such dirty minds! Octavia probably just lost her contact or something and they went in to get it...
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Thank you for the confidence vote Mariacheat-Brony!
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No need to complain. I'll do it for you.
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We have the dirty minds? You're the one who wrote it like that, we just know how you write.
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Dammit! I would have gotten away with it if it wasn't for this pesky editor of mine unravelling my carefully laid plans! I even had a scary mask and everything so no one would know it was me!
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Hey, I just said we know how you write and that is how you will write it (plus, how everything is going, and what they were talking about doing, we can assume fairly well).
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Hmmm...
Me guessta...
Although...
I guess that means I'm a boring and predictable writer now...
OH THE HUMANITY!!!!
(Also for any pony who might not know... This is called sarcasm) eeyup!
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*giggle*
Another great chapter but I demand more!
oh shit....
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On it!
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You don't say?
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Oh, you find something funny?
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What you wrote, really, that the way he writes it makes us think of that kinda stuff
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You know it's true.
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I certainly do
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Well then... If you want longer chapters, then get your butt over here and start writing!
Though I hope everybody's going to love the new chapter I'm doing, it is finally time for the dinner to commence! So I might be able to work a joke or two in their... maybe... don't hold your breath though!
kinda sucks to be kazooie, i mean, your wife's gonna screw her sister and her marefriend and he doesnt get any at all?
also, what happened to their relationship? in the chapter it says thier having problems, but i dont remember if it was brought up in earlier chapters
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No, not per say, it's been hinted at once or twice, but this is the first time Fiddlesticks says that clearly. She has for example mentioned before that Kazooie and her aren't really having to much sex anymore. But still... yeah it would be kind of a bummer knowing your wife's gonna screw her sister and her marefriend and not get any action there at all!
Then again I'm evil like that!
3564879 It's "butt," short for "buttocks." I figured it was just a typo when I saw that mistake in the chapter, but seeing you repeat the mistake in the comments... And the phrase is, "Oh the humanity!"
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Hehe...
There was no typo up their... nooooo... no incorrect spelling of butt anywhere.
Besides there's no way you can prove that I corrected the error after you pointed it out! So there!!!
Except for the fact that I just admitted to doing just that...
I should really have stopped talking like two sentences ago!
3565239 hope things work out for them
Perhaps a spinoff in the future?
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I have some plans don't you worry.
3565328 thank for replying. I've always found that most authors go the route of "I'll screw someone else and not think a thing of it"
It's good to see someone write a character that still wants to try and fix things instead of the usual. Things like that usually turn me off of a fic, but its great that your taking it in a direction other than what most people do, it shows good character development.
Keep up the great work
lol i think photo finish is in for a suprise
The horsefeathers are about to hit the fan.
( oh this is going to be good. Need popcorn.)
3565276 Hey, where'd it go? There's only one explanation for these disappearing typos: "Ze Maggicks!"
Sexy times ensue as we watch the three head into the shower! ...Or there's a giant tentacle monster in there...or maybe it's an alien trying to abduct them! ...No, it's Pinkie Pie. Definitely Pinkie Pie. No matter what it is, Pinkie is just disguised as what's in the shower. My hypothesis for the next chapter isn't off, right?
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Definitely spot on... no really... that is now cannon no matter what I write in the next chapter!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! SEXY TIMES ENSUE!!!
*Edit*
And good job with the chapter, it's nice to see them all getting along so well.
ps. You MUST write a clop sidestory with those two Filly-scout counselors!!
those photos...
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Hehe... I just might, of course if there is anypony out there who wants to run with that idea then they are most welcome to do so. Who knows... might even be your first story Bowow.
So if somepony does end up making a version of this idea that fits into A Different Kind of Music's story-line then I'll link to it from this story as a little extra bonus incentive for you creative masses out there. Just like it did for psp7master's funny side story about The Adventures of Sir Morning Glory the Dildo. Even though it didn't fit into the contingency of A Different Kind of Music... it was definitely worth a link or two.
Go read it by the way, if you haven't already!
YES!, oh so much YES!.. Tavi is the one that said yes and not Fiddle Hahahaha, oh my sweet Celestia.
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Wait, what? You make a jok and it turns into reality.... Well, at least we know that it will be funny! ...And you're going to write the next chapter soon, right?
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Juup it's the next of my chapters to be done I believe. Then it's time for True Black ones more.
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Well I wouldn't call it my first story, my first clop story would be more accurate. If I ever wanted to be the one to write it anyway. I just don't think I'm good enough at writing to try my hoof at some clop just yet
And yes I've read it, definitely one to read if somepony hasn't already.
Filly scouts... I would never have predicted that.
Fav and like cuz awesome fic!
This is getting really good but.... There must be more!
to/too
I think about her sexy butt as well.
That reads like it was all supposed to be part of the same paragraph, with everything after the dialogue being in Vinyl-musing-italics.
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Thank you very much Sparkler! I will fix those things as soon as I can.