A Death Knight arrives in Equestria thanks to a malfunctioning Death Gate. All seems well at first... but soon a nightmare takes hold as the scourge rise from the darkness. A prophecy foretold over ten thousand years ago now aims to fulfill itself.
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nice to see an update :) any kind of estimate on when it will reach completion like 2023,2024 or maybe even this year?
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If I had to give a rough estimate I'd say maybe 2023ish. However I have a tendency to disappear randomly due to my work.
I always come back, though.
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I'm not disagreeing with you. I just can't write third person, sorry. Tried before, just doesn't sound right. If its that glaring of an issue I guess this just isn't the story for you.
Every story I have is written in first person, I’m not about to flip my style around suddenly. It’s just what I’m used to. I don’t want the quality of the story to nosedive because I’m gonna suddenly decide to start doing third person.
After reading this over the past few days I gotta say it's a good story. It's got an interesting premise, good pacing, believable characters, and the way you write combat is short and quick like how it would be if a DK actually landed in Equestria. I've liked the small conflicts you keep setting up and solving too as to many stories skip the filler conflicts and character building to jump straight into the endgame. Then you have you know who coming to Equestria and that's two big bads lined up on top of that. Already I feel like more effort has gone into this than the entirety of the shadowland's storyline. Not a high bar I know but it is a measure regardless. I eagerly await the next chapter. :)
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Thank you so much for the praise! You pointed out pretty much exactly what I was trying to accomplish with this story.
Personally, I have a notes chapter completely dedicated to future plotlines, characters, descriptions and even the end (Which is already concrete and in place) and it’s over 15k words on it’s own…
This is gonna be one wild ride, I hope you stick around and continue to enjoy it!