A Death Knight arrives in Equestria thanks to a malfunctioning Death Gate. All seems well at first... but soon a nightmare takes hold as the scourge rise from the darkness. A prophecy foretold over ten thousand years ago now aims to fulfill itself.
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All of the comments that used to be here were accidentally yeeted during the (*Edit* First *Edit*) rewrite... so don't worry you can still post comments here! It's just empty... for now
Hope to see many comments!
I'm liking the story so far, definitely haven't seen another like it, but you got a couple of things wrong with what DKs are. They're dead. They don't tire out, they don't need to eat, drink, or sleep, though they still do as their subconscious mind many be trying to cling to the lives they lead before their rebirth. For a future reference as well, DKs have to take good care of themselves as lack of hygiene can cause their bodies to decompose. With a little bit of touch ups here and there you could keep the overall plot of what happened in this chapter while better fitting it into the established lore of WoW.
Hope I helped and can't wait for the next chapter.
6094660 I know this don't worry, however the reason as to why he does have to eat/drink/sleep etc will be explained later on in the story.