Well, that was quite a twist.

Nice twist.

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I am sure you can find the perfectly legal punishment for using magic that is byond doubt evil.

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Thank you kindly, it has been fixed.

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And again the mistakes slip past my vigilance! Thank you for helping me hunt the lil' buggers down.
I'm currently working on chapter 5 already, the gods struck me with the mighty bolt of inspiration it seems. Expect it soon!

Sandova out

Not much to say honestly, I exhausted my intelligent remarks in my first comment so good job will have to suffice.

I really hope this story doesn't end up sickeningly sweet, as stories like this one tends to happen, or at least Sandova has some suspicions about the place. Some nice stuff so far :)

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Then you might want to stick around, war is not sweet at all(at least, not since the last time I checked)

Sandova out

Haha well look at Sandova's luck, he managed to find the one skeleton that would actually belong to someone who wanted to be reaniated

"Are you sure that this is a good idea Twilight?"

HELL NAW, BUT LET'S DO IT ANYWAY!

As for the results of the party, I'll just give some hints in chapter 4 and leave the rest to your slaanesh tainted imagination(I know you want to)

I've microscanned chapter four, and read between every line horizontally, and vertically. The hints you speak of do not exist. I need closure, dammit!

I like it!

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To be fair, that's probably an equestrian thing more than his luck. Equeestria is full of weird coincidences. (Also probably related to the pinkie/puddinghead line)
FOREEEEEVER