A dread necromancer ends up in Equestria. After finally getting used to the world, it is plunged into chaos and he needs to come to terms with his old and new beliefs.
2776773 That is the point, it doesn't make sense. And you saw what happened next, one ghastly meal for this guy.
But in all seriousness, I did that on purpose, logic doesn't apply on him. No normal logic, at least. And you know what he said about his magic, mostly doesn't mean completely.
2780742 Very serious. Did you even bother reading the label on Trixie? No? Where here it is.
Large (or even small) doses of Trixie, can be lethal.
Large doses (Trixie mentioned 10 times or more) of Trixie over a short period of time (24 hours) can lead to false sense of admiration or annoyance. Some cases result in homicidal behavior towards Trixie it self and/or Trixie users. If you or a friend have taken large doses of Trixie, it's recommended to seek the nearest police station and/or police officer and put yourself or your friend, under immediate arrest. If arrest is not allowed, ask to be put into the drunk tank.
Small doses of Trixie (Trixie mentioned less than 10 times), over an extended period of time (longer than 24 hours) can lead to a large list of harmful side effects such as: hate of Trixie, hate of things related to Trixie, inability to think, read, talk about, or look at Trixie without immediate or very fast acting nausea: possibly even resulting in your head turning inside out (slowly).
More doses of Trixie then recommended for plot advancement, usage as an unneeded character that an original character could do 100 times better, or useless cameo, is supposed to be prescribed by a licensed medical official or professional author. More usage of Trixie then needed can result in death and loss of interest by you and many others: affiliates, associates, and followers.
Warning: Trixie best used by November 19, 2010, or risk overuse/retardation.
I don't know about you, but I don't want to be caught any where near that crap.
2782055 Tl;dr this guy hates trixie. You know, the comment would've been funny if you weren't suggesting that I am a bad author for using a character that YOU dislike. I introduced her because I didn't like the way she was treated in her first episode and I wanted to set that straight. I don't care if you hate a character or not, nor that you commnent on your distaste. What I can't stand is people who think they know how to write MY story better than I do, which is the message I get from your last paragrapgh. I guess you'll unfave now, since I am neither rewriting my capter nor wil I stop using Trixie in my story. Have a good day.
2784063 Nah man, you're an awesome and fantastic writer. Not that what I say actually matters though, I realize that, and I'm just saying I don't like Trixie as a character, so much in fact that it repulses me from even the best writing (such as yours). You keep on doing what you're doing. I will unfavorite this story, but that's because I don't wish to read the story anymore. But I will NEVER give this story a thumbs down. Nor would I ever ask you to rewrite ANYTHING or remove ANY character no matter how repulsive they might be to me personally.
The last paragraph wasn't directed at you but towards other people who pull in Trixie for anything. I reviewed it for I could have said "I changed it," but I don't see what is completely and solely pointed towards you as an author. And I don't want you to stop using Trixie nor do I think I would be very good at writing your story. I simply stated why I wanted to stop reading and got overly dramatic/bored when someone commented on it.
P.S. I know this probably isn't the time or place, but check your grammar in your last comment. Ew~. :S
Also, some people live perfectly normal and healthy lives--completely tripping the f*** out on Trixie, 24/7. You can too.
2784426 Okay, I apologize for my reaction. I tend to get defensive easily. Shame Trixie ruined the stroy for you, but to each his own, I guess. Hope ya find some other nice stories here, with no surprise doses of Trixie.
2784992 I understand your defensive stance and there's no need to apologize, and I've already found two stories pertaining to "dark" like magic and the such.
the plot thickens...
2771766 indeed it does...i think celestia needs to lay off the cake a bit...
2771890
Hahahahaha, that comment made me laugh. Good one, sir.
Trixie.
Great story.
Thanks but no thanks.
wait.... red tipped curved horn fading to grey....
AHA!! I BET THEIR BASE IS FAR UNDERGROUND WITH STAIRS EVERYWHERE!!!! STAIRS, OOOH stairs, MMYEESS STAIRS OH
what I'm trying to say is that the horn belongs to sombra :p
2772209 why so many stairs? cos fucking slinky thats why
slinky is amazing
Sombra is best villain.
IT IS fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/293/d/d/so_awesome_rainbow_dash_by_misterbrony-d4da6jj.png
2776773
That is the point, it doesn't make sense. And you saw what happened next, one ghastly meal for this guy.
But in all seriousness, I did that on purpose, logic doesn't apply on him. No normal logic, at least. And you know what he said about his magic, mostly doesn't mean completely.
2771963 Seriously?
2780742
Very serious. Did you even bother reading the label on Trixie?
No? Where here it is.
Large (or even small) doses of Trixie, can be lethal.
Large doses (Trixie mentioned 10 times or more) of Trixie over a short period of time (24 hours) can lead to false sense of admiration or annoyance. Some cases result in homicidal behavior towards Trixie it self and/or Trixie users. If you or a friend have taken large doses of Trixie, it's recommended to seek the nearest police station and/or police officer and put yourself or your friend, under immediate arrest. If arrest is not allowed, ask to be put into the drunk tank.
Small doses of Trixie (Trixie mentioned less than 10 times), over an extended period of time (longer than 24 hours) can lead to a large list of harmful side effects such as: hate of Trixie, hate of things related to Trixie, inability to think, read, talk about, or look at Trixie without immediate or very fast acting nausea: possibly even resulting in your head turning inside out (slowly).
More doses of Trixie then recommended for plot advancement, usage as an unneeded character that an original character could do 100 times better, or useless cameo, is supposed to be prescribed by a licensed medical official or professional author. More usage of Trixie then needed can result in death and loss of interest by you and many others: affiliates, associates, and followers.
Warning: Trixie best used by November 19, 2010, or risk overuse/retardation.
I don't know about you, but I don't want to be caught any where near that crap.
2782055
Tl;dr this guy hates trixie.
You know, the comment would've been funny if you weren't suggesting that I am a bad author for using a character that YOU dislike. I introduced her because I didn't like the way she was treated in her first episode and I wanted to set that straight. I don't care if you hate a character or not, nor that you commnent on your distaste. What I can't stand is people who think they know how to write MY story better than I do, which is the message I get from your last paragrapgh.
I guess you'll unfave now, since I am neither rewriting my capter nor wil I stop using Trixie in my story. Have a good day.
Sndova out
2784063
Nah man, you're an awesome and fantastic writer.
Not that what I say actually matters though, I realize that, and I'm just saying I don't like Trixie as a character, so much in fact that it repulses me from even the best writing (such as yours). You keep on doing what you're doing. I will unfavorite this story, but that's because I don't wish to read the story anymore. But I will NEVER give this story a thumbs down. Nor would I ever ask you to rewrite ANYTHING or remove ANY character no matter how repulsive they might be to me personally.
The last paragraph wasn't directed at you but towards other people who pull in Trixie for anything. I reviewed it for I could have said "I changed it," but I don't see what is completely and solely pointed towards you as an author. And I don't want you to stop using Trixie nor do I think I would be very good at writing your story. I simply stated why I wanted to stop reading and got overly dramatic/bored when someone commented on it.
P.S. I know this probably isn't the time or place, but check your grammar in your last comment. Ew~. :S
Also, some people live perfectly normal and healthy lives--completely tripping the f*** out on Trixie, 24/7. You can too.
2784426
Okay, I apologize for my reaction. I tend to get defensive easily. Shame Trixie ruined the stroy for you, but to each his own, I guess. Hope ya find some other nice stories here, with no surprise doses of Trixie.
May the Gods be with you
2784992
I understand your defensive stance and there's no need to apologize, and I've already found two stories pertaining to "dark" like magic and the such.
The Nine be with you.
2772627 *Raphael snaps his fingers and thousands of slinkies fall rom the sky* LET THERE BE SLINKIES!
2771766 And you want to slap it and see it jiggle like fine jelatin
What? A decendant of King Sombra? Fascinating...