Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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2925211 and 2924913 Thank you. It was a fun day and I even got this for my birthday.
Hope you enjoy the new chapter.
I enjoy the level of 'sappy' in your stories for some reason it's great to see you update and I hope to see even more from you in the future
each other :P
That was the first thing I saw but I did go through at a rather faster pace. Hopefully, I can get a lot of these other chapters ahead done this weekend so I can finally be caught up... or mostly caught up.
Still, it was another cute and sappy chapter. I liked the scene where they go swimming. It was pretty adorable and I like the idea of them swimming and snuggling in the water. Things seem to be getting pretty heated along the cute affections.
2930657 On a sidenote, your plushies remind me of this picture
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PegaStruck must finish the chapter!
*THREE HOURS LATER*
PegaStruck is still reading the same paragraph. PegaStruck is too much of a sissy to get over this paragraph. PegaStruck needs to sleep for his long tests for the next day but he says " before everything"
I love the portrayels of the characters, it feels so... right.
The perfect song for this chapter: The Best Day of My Life, American Authors.
i just now realized i can read this whole fic in a night if i wanted to...
wow.
~Wywint
Loved this chapter, hints of worldbuilding there with the flashbacks and everything with Celestia and Luna and it finally kind of meshed with the other chapters cause Celestia came off a bit overly formal in the first couple of appearances here. Primarily that makes sense due to every single one of those were when she was in full regal mode and ten to twenty years before her sister came back. All that tells me is that Celestia definitely got much more relaxed in her demeanor. Bit less cold. Still has that armor up in public, but privately she seems more approachable. Also you definitely trimmed the fat for the chapters so far, I mean I remember there being 70,000 words in the story and now there's less than that. Which I think overall helps. Loved the fluff overall- even when Angel completely ruins the moment- but it feels much more concise and to the point. Also I see there's at least some talk of both a daughter of Celestia and Luna being not so straight. Also I just realized that so far up to chapter 6, there is barely any Twilight mentions in the story which feels strange when I'm so used to seeing her take center stage in war stories.
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Yea, I didn't want Twilight to be all central/focal, that's overused. She will have her moments (with somepony special too..) but, till this point, she hasn't yet entered the scene as it was other stuff + earlier days Flutterdash.
Not a fan of the Discord ship