Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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Man, I hope Trixie's okay, Though that's one way to integrate the Alicorn Amulet (or in this case, Gryphon? Amulet) into the story. Also things I continue liking- Soarin' and Spitfire continue to be one of the more fun aspects of the romance. They just seem so relaxed and fun in the story every time they pop up. And it's always nice to hear snippets of what's going on in the wider world of the story. Didn't expect a Klugetown mention, but it's always fun to see more usage of movie stuff. Also I really thought the Flutterdash eatery scene was actually needed, cause everytime I read this story I get nice happy feelings about the cute romance stuff and then I wonder when grim, horrible stuff will happen to the characters or near the characters cause now stuff is fully in motion and now I wonder what the Wonderbolts will do to deal with this. Mandatory draft of able bodied pegasus? Cause everytime they get mentioned, they are on a peacetime low point of recruitment. It's a well written story when I can bounce from death and war to cute stuff without losing the momentum and stress this story is building.
Seriously the romance is the bedrock that's going to both provide bits of levity and also drama as stuff just gets worse. And yeah, I still remember that Shining and Cadance are captured or having their own accidental war story somewhere else. The good guys are already losing and the war hasn't even started yet.
Yeah, this coming war is going to be super messy.
This chapter almost feels familiar now cause I think I remember the previous version ending on a fight scene near Canterlot or Ponyville so either I'm misremembering or that's coming up soonish with how the gryphons found them at the end of the chapter.
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The Flutterdash scene up front is the only part from the old story in this chapter and its good to know that it's worth its place. I'm building up to what you might remember as the big ending of the griffon at the gate original chapter. It's still the ending to this 3 parter, but more epic now that I've built up a more wholesome story. I'll release it later this month. Makes me happy that Spitfire and Soarin get a positive mention there.
I see Lyra and Bon Bon got no notice, their scene a bit meh?
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Oops, I knew I forgot to mention something. Personally I actually like having Lyra and Bon Bon in the story cause it's nice to see mention of Bon Bon's past and any reference back to bugbears are fun. Always fun to see more James Bond spy stuff. I was actually really worried about them since Lyra and Bon Bon are good together and I've seen stories where they break up because of the spy thing. A lot of stuff is building up and it's going to be fun to see what the chapters after this arc have in them cause I liked the original stopping point and wanted to see what was next for quite a while. Makes sense why Bon Bon and Lyra are in it too cause with how the war is going to break out, it's going to need some spies fighting against either Changelings or whatever things the gryphons have. Weird how there's like four plots now going on and yet each have rather nice worldbuilding bits in them.
Again. If you need these items to began enemy. You are not supieror but quite inferior.