Dan is a human who has found himself in Equestria, on Nightmare Night. (Yeah, another one of these, but seriously read it). What will happen to him while he is there? Can he get home? What will the ponies think? "Ponies?" Yes Dan, ponies.
Ahhh but featuring whom?? maybe some Luna?? or Twilight??
looking good so far .. first time i've seen this though .. "It is in a state of faint.” .. fun
This creature was weird: it stood on two legs, had strange claw like things for hooves, and very little fur. Nothing anypony had ever seen before.
Spike would disagree.
1830820 (Your username) Eeyup.
I think it's good but surely he would have been a bit more... panicked?
A bit rushed, but I'll give it a go.
Doormat dan
Ahhh but featuring whom?? maybe some Luna?? or Twilight??
looking good so far .. first time i've seen this though .. "It is in a state of faint.” .. fun
This creature was weird: it stood on two legs, had strange claw like things for hooves, and very little fur. Nothing anypony had ever seen before.
Spike would disagree.
1830820 (Your username) Eeyup.
I think it's good but surely he would have been a bit more... panicked?
A bit rushed, but I'll give it a go.
Doormat dan