" I'll take that as a Yes." The doctor said. " Will it be okay?" There's that Pegasus again...STILL Haven't got her na-
" Yes Fluttershy, he'll be okay." Fluttershy. How'd I forget that one? Jack, you are a Dumb-ass.
As I look around the room, I Hear a voice from behind me. " Hey...Uh... Sorry I Hit you in the back of the face. No hard feelings?" I Thought for a moment. " The past has past. We gotta live in the present right?" Clever move. Not. " So...Friends?" "Friends" I Say as I shake her han-er... Hoof. "Name's Rai-" "Rainbow Dash. Fastest flyer in Equestria." Thank you brain.
"Well... yeah... how do you know my name?"
"Long story." "So... Mister...." Name! " Jack. Don't have a last name. Well...I Guess I do." "And that would be?" " Fifteen. People Call me Jack Fifteen." That sounded better in my head "Odd. So! Where'd you come from?" Aw Geez... " Want my life story?"
Please say no! "Sure." Shit.
"Well, I grew up an Orphan, roaming the streets, Getting food from trash-cans. Sometimes getting food from nice people. Heh, I remember those days, Good people. When I was older, I Joined the marines." "Marines?" Dammit Fluttershy!
"Special Military Forces. Anyway, I Joined the marines, Killing people for my country. Let's see... when I Got here, the year was 2016, So... 14 Years. 14 Years in the service. Killing men for freedom. I Sometimes get flashbacks." The doctor Notices a raised heart rate. I Scream as I Pass out. Having another flashback. The flashbacks. The nightmares. My life. My fucking shitty life. I Suppose i could start a new life here.
*Flashback*
I Had a promise to keep. I Wasn't going to break it for my life. Kyle had been shot. I Was going to kill the S.O.B.s who'd got him. All of them. As I sprinted to the line, I Loaded my M4 and my Glock 19. Run, I'm coming for you.
"RAAAAAAAH!" I Yelled, as I stab an Enemy in the head. I love this knife, Saved my life on Many occasions. This, was another save. I take an enemy's pistol, Shoot him in the chest, and Shoot his allies. Then, A frag grenade rolls by. "SHIT!" I Think out loud. I Toss the grenade, Exploding 10 Feet away, somehow, I hadn't got hit by shrapnel. "YOU THINK YOU CAN KILL ME?! THINK AGAIN!" I Scream into a crowd.
A Soldier tackles me to the ground. I Tell him Something as he's about to execute me. "Think for a second." I Say, reaching to my grenade belt. " One move. I Blow us the fuck up." I Guess he hadn't seen the Glock ,as I Quickly grab it and shoot him Twice
"Now, You should have thought shouldn't you?" I Ask him. " Ye-yes." "Now, I'll give you a choice, Die slowly, Or I shoot you. Which one?" Giving him a choice to die Quickly, or die painfully. " Shoot me." Shoot him. " Good choice." I Tell him as I Take my M4 and shoot him. His brain spattered against the wall.
"You. You are the one." I point at a soldier. " Vhat do you vant from me?! Money?! I Have money!" Wrong. " No. I Want money. Not that sort, But blood money." "NOOOOO" He yells as I kill him. " Rest in peace, Slimebag."
*Present day. 1 Hour after pass-out*
"Uuuugh" I Groan again. " Hey! Your awake!" It was Dash "Ugh Y-yeah. I'm up" I Looked at my surroundings, recognizing them as the Twilight's library. Wait library. Crap, wave of questions in 3...2...1...
" So. Jack was it?" I Nodded "Okay, Jack. What planet are you from?" "Earth, Sol System." Blah. I Feel like a nerd. " Hmm. Nowhere anywhere..." " Oh it's there." Gunshot. I'd occasionally Hear those in my head ever since... years back. " You don't laugh much to you?" Peh. I Almost never laugh. " Never had the chance to." True.
"Never had the chance to?" Ugh. " What's it like on 'Earth'?" " Wars. Death. Murder. Normal there." " Wars?! Death?! NORMAL!?!?" " Well yeah. We fight for anything." I Said calmly. Twilight however, was FREAKING OUT. " FIGHT?!" " Yep. I was in wars. Killed hundreds. Could kill hundreds more if I Needed to." That shocked her Dash, and Spike. " Whoa. What's the freak?" " I'm not a freak." That, stunned him. "It-it-" "Talked? Yes." Twilight? " Next Question: What do you eat?" Food.
"Meat mostly." Again, shocked. " Don't worry. I Won't eat any of you." "Good." Dash said, slightly scared of me. Spike was gone. " So... It's getting late. Have anywhere to sleep?" "Nope. I Did grow up out on the streets, so I Think I can handle it."
"No! I've got an extra room!" Dash yelled. " But Rainbow lives up in the clouds." I Said. "I can use a Cloud walking spell."
"Right...How do I-" "I Can fly you know." Awkward? I Dunno. As Twilight used the spell on me she said " Now, this will last as long you can live." "Whoa! You can do that!?"I Half-yelled, Half-asked. "Yep. I'm one of the strongest unicorns in Equestria"
Five minutes later, we were getting ready to fly. " So, Afraid of flight?" She asked. "Nope" " Good. Speed?" Sorta "Nope"
Not a minute later, we were flying and I was Smiling. Smiling, I could get used to this. As we landed at Dash's house, I Could see a small blush on her face. I Threw it aside as we walked in. 'She can't be in love with an Alien. Could see? I Mean, it wouldn't be.. NO! She can't love me.' I Told myself. Wait. Feelings?
Haven't had feelings for... Anything in a long time. Only to kill and kill. Gunshot. Death scream. I Shuddered at those.
"You okay?" "Ye-yeah. Just... Voices of the men I've killed in my mind..."
( Yep. 8 A.M. Here. I'll be working on it at night. See ya!)
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Burt Gummer (Tremors) X Ponies crossover = Still not attained, Para-military Paranoid? Check.... Gonna read on ebook? Check Gonna pre fav? Check
Where to begin, where to begin? I'm going to start by coloring the words that do not need to be capitalized.
"Jack is a former Marine, after 14 Years in the Corps, he is transported into the The MLPVerse with only his Trusty combat Knife, and his clothing."
"Yep. HiE Fic. And I know it kinda Sucks, so, Yeah."
"( A Bit rushed. I Know.)"
Running after you get stabbed in the stomach? Romance out of nowhere?
I'm out. (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
COMPLIMENT: Well, at least you know it sucks.
needs to be fixed and im going to see what will happen *favs* there be happy about that and you really need to slow down make us see things your rushing it but still good i think
was reading chapter names, saw the word 'Love?' in the fourth chapter, and spit out my cereal. yeesh, thats a bad sign, and i'm talking from experience. still, i know know how hard likes and favorites are to come by with soldier HiEs so i gave it a like and a favorite.
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uhm.... Where to start?
This is too rushed for one, and, its hard to even read this as all of the story is single paragraphs. You should make a new line if a different character speaks. And, not trying to sound whiny or anything, but the stories are just too short...