"princess' have their needs" Rogue apostrophe, everyone run!
COMPLIMENT: I am happy to see that this fic does not have a romance tag. Seems like people always expect love to follow sex. Bit of casual sex never hurt anyone.

could you please follow this up with another story?
Its very good

1750391 I will admit, I have an idea for a second chapter. I won't say anything now, but if enough people ask for it, I may write it. And thank you for the compliment.

Hmmm. So Luna is a freak. OH YES.

This was fun, I never thought of Luna having... such diverse interests.

Good job, I loved the premise and enjoyed the story immensely, especially the interactions with the guards.

I would love to see a chapter 2.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

1750391>>1890883 So, I have decided to write that second chapter. I don't know when it will be written, but it will be.

1895683

Woot! Happy to hear it.

I'll be looking forward to it when you're ready.

1895683 glad to hear cant wait

1749719
This means plural.
When some names end in ess, sometimes the s is left off of when one writes a plural. It was Tess' job to do it, is an example. It is not unique to plurals.

1925179 Someone else knows this rule?? i.imgur.com/99WZ6.png THANK CELESTIA I'M NOT ALONE!!! I find it also useful in cases of plural possessive words, like with princesses'. Otherwise it sounds like you're stuttering.

1925188
I am a grammar Nazi. i.imgur.com/teICa.png
Also, do you know of the script that makes images show up by default again? Because it's good for the emoticons.

1925179
You are incorrect. In the example you gave, it is acceptable to write "Tess' job" instead of "Tess's job" because that is a special case involving possession and a name ending in "s" (e.g. James' ball, Miss Williams' classroom). "Princess' have needs" involves neither. The correct phrase would be "princesses have needs". This is a simple case of plurality and the misuse of apostrophes.
That said, I appreciate your defense of the English language and double-checking of my work. Do not let this miscorrection dissuade you.

1938140
Ah feel stupid. Princess' have needs.
What was I thinking?

lol

1939703>>1938140 Looking back at what I wrote, I realize, ya, I messed up. Goes to show you shouldn't try to use obscure rules of the English language at 1:30am.

1944016
You and me both lol.

Deep Thought

42!

3018278
Yes, that is the answer.
But what is the question?

a conversation the rest of the castle needs to here.”

Hear ;)

3018278
The question is:
How often Luna wants to come tonight?