Okay, it's pretty good so far, but there's one thing that is bugging me...
What kind of zombies are these?
Because if they're A: The slow, staggering kind of zombies (Walking Dead zombies), then I don't see the reason why Applejack would use her shotgun in the Ponyville area where other infected can hear the blast from a mile away. But if they're B: Super fast, super strong runner zombies that can rip a pony in half (Left 4 Dead Zombies), then using the gun would be totally reasonable.
Just sayin' Guess I'll find out in the next chapter
Ouch.
I like this, keep it coming.
1741517 Glad you do.
Holy mother of BUCK, that was an awesome chapter, short, but still note worthy.
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I like writing short chapters, firstly, it leaves room for more because I don't explain EVERYTHING right away
Second, I think of ideas as they come, most of what you read in my stuff comes to me in the moment.
You made a successful zombie story. Holy wow. That is hard to do. I thought me and a few others were the only ones.
Great job!
1742347 Thank you very much! It means a lot to me knowing that people like my work. I suppose I'm part of those proud few now.
You actually managed to message me before I could finish my review, so I just forgot a good deal of what I wanted to say.
1743643 Well... I just derped
BOOM headshot ah like this, well ah sure hope that there's more to this WOHOO
Okay, it's pretty good so far, but there's one thing that is bugging me...
What kind of zombies are these?
Because if they're A: The slow, staggering kind of zombies (Walking Dead zombies), then I don't see the reason why Applejack would use her shotgun in the Ponyville area where other infected can hear the blast from a mile away. But if they're B: Super fast, super strong runner zombies that can rip a pony in half (Left 4 Dead Zombies), then using the gun would be totally reasonable.
Just sayin' Guess I'll find out in the next chapter
3340975Don't forget about Rule number two