Lovely chapter. The story behind it is really coming through now, where previous chapters were more about the clop. (Not that the clop is bad, it's just nice to see some good emotion as well.) I like how Twilight is in charge now. The note is an interesting touch, but I think it might help her deal with her issues more thoroughly. I wonder what Cadance has planned.
Basically, I'm looking forward to seeing more.
"Twilight was ready to face his problems" -> "her" "the year has only a little more than half over" -> "was" "induce sleep with magic that lead to clairvoyant dreams" -> "led" "She slide into bed next to her brother, taking comfort in his snores." -> "slid"
Now I wonder if Twilight's assailant could have been under effect of some strange magic
I've been thinking about my posting schedule and wanted to ask if you all would prefer shorter, yet more frequent updates.
4k is short, right? Shut yer trap, lazyass, you can't even muster up enough motivation to publish ANYTHING since over a year!
Hmm, I don't think you should strive to write long or short chapters--just end them when it seems appropriate to you; a week or half a year--it doesn't matter, I shall await the next release anyway. What she said.
Lovely chapter. The story behind it is really coming through now, where previous chapters were more about the clop. (Not that the clop is bad, it's just nice to see some good emotion as well.) I like how Twilight is in charge now. The note is an interesting touch, but I think it might help her deal with her issues more thoroughly. I wonder what Cadance has planned.
Basically, I'm looking forward to seeing more.
"Twilight was ready to face his problems" -> "her"
"the year has only a little more than half over" -> "was"
"induce sleep with magic that lead to clairvoyant dreams" -> "led"
"She slide into bed next to her brother, taking comfort in his snores." -> "slid"
That's not Cadance, is it?
Now I wonder if Twilight's assailant could have been under effect of some strange magic
4k is short, right?
Shut yer trap, lazyass, you can't even muster up enough motivation to publish ANYTHING since over a year!
Hmm, I don't think you should strive to write long or short chapters--just end them when it seems appropriate to you; a week or half a year--it doesn't matter, I shall await the next release anyway.
What she said.