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0/10. My jimmies remain firmly unrustled. Next time, don't make your trollfic so blatantly obvious. Better yet, skip the trollfic and write a story that's actually entertaining.
“She took a book and ripped it up. And by ripped it up I mean she put it through a paper shredder.” But then why didn't you just say that in the first place?!
Also, story is bad and you should feel bad.
Interesting plot, but why all the hate on Twilight?
1699569 Wow, jimmies. So original. 1699573 Because she has a dildo on her head. 1699584 I'm glad you liked it. 1699590 That was the gayest comment I've ever read. 1699596 You came? 1699597 Because fuck you, that's why. To both questions. 1699624 The greatest MLP fanfic of all time.
“Then they raped her for 600 hours straight.” 600 hours is nearly a month. I demand to know how this is possible! Do ponies have amazing stamina that allows then to rape for months at a time with no break?
Scientific evidence would be appreciated, thank you.
1699641 I'll include more in the next chapters. 1699680 SHE'S CHAINED UP IN THE LIBRARY WHILE SPIKE RAPES HER IN THE ASS. SHE DOESN'T HAVE A COMPUTER. USE LOGIC. 1699681 Yes. I have plenty of video evidence. I will upload it ASAP. 1699692 BECAUSE HER CUTIE MARK KIND OF LOOKS LIKE A FRACTAL OF GOATSE. 1699706 Now you're getting it.
1699724 It has nothing to do with Season 3. I hate Twilight because she gets vaginal lubricant all over all the books in the library and that's just disgusting. 1699725 Something tells me you came.
1699741 I dunno if I got this figured out, but: A) I don't think that looks like Twilight Cutie Mark at all...looks like four trees grown close to a pit hole with a mini-black hole within it. also reminds me of the Heart of Fear from World of Warcraft (cause I decided to give you even more ammo to hit me with in your reply) B) Not nice to call people names. C) I think Twilight would have a heart attack if she spills milk near a book, forget vaginal lube. D) I dunno why I am doing this to protect my favorite fictional animal. E) You made a account under 4 hours ago.
So a new question arises...why do people troll? I don't get how people find amusement in other people's grief...it's not really saying it's "smart" it's pretty much being a jerk for the sake of being a jerk from what I see. So if you can please, tell me why people troll others? is it over a dare? is it because they find amusement over it? Are they getting paid to do it? What, dood? And I don't mean just you, dood. I mean like all the people that like to do this.
1699794 Because I don't like not knowing why people troll, it's enrages and fascinates me. But in all seriousness, I'm just butt-hurt at all the Anti-Twilight lately, dood.
Guys give him a break its his first fiction so take it easy. he is very new so let just say hes bad for now and ones he gets better a better maybe he can be one of the top writers. I believe in him
something tells me that, you my good friend, are, and idiot, and i should lock you in a room that has mutants from Chernobyl, and, then give you to the Cybermen.
she ripped out Dash's vocal cords.how the hell! Then they raped her for 600 hours straight. .I i don't think so....really. Though there was a huge-ass investigation. They have thoses? if it works then the old guy will get put in jail.Dash jumps out her window I was all NOOOOOO dash hit Scootaloo.. killing her.OH FUCK YA U LITTLE BITCH touch dash and u get a face full of it.... the Wonderbolts dug her back up and shoved her corpse down a stinky latrine. why waste there time anyway she would be found and the wonder bolts dna will be found on dash .And the hole ass investigation would have got them too..but..um you just forgot right? I'm sure. her friend would never NEVER FORGET about her they would make time even if it was years..And magic! just grow them limbs back.second ch seems..short..and kind of good well writen but sill its like you fast forward too much
You're a liar if you say this didn't make your dick twitch.
0/10. My jimmies remain firmly unrustled. Next time, don't make your trollfic so blatantly obvious. Better yet, skip the trollfic and write a story that's actually entertaining.
What I wanna know is: Why? Why does everyone have something against Twilight?
I'm not sure why this warranted a second chapter. The first was plenty bad enough.
“She took a book and ripped it up. And by ripped it up I mean she put it through a paper shredder.” But then why didn't you just say that in the first place?!
Also, story is bad and you should feel bad.
Interesting plot, but why all the hate on Twilight?
1699569
Wow, jimmies. So original.
1699573
Because she has a dildo on her head.
1699584
I'm glad you liked it.
1699590
That was the gayest comment I've ever read.
1699596
You came?
1699597
Because fuck you, that's why. To both questions.
1699624
The greatest MLP fanfic of all time.
needs more asstrash
1699641 You're such a rebel.
1699657
ikr
“Then they raped her for 600 hours straight.” 600 hours is nearly a month. I demand to know how this is possible! Do ponies have amazing stamina that allows then to rape for months at a time with no break?
Scientific evidence would be appreciated, thank you.
Being someone that holds Twilight on a golden pedestal, I must ask.
Why hate the mare that pretty much runs around saving Equestria from the shit Celestia forgot to deal with years ago, with her friends?
I couldn't even get past the first few sentences.
You need some help, dood.
1699692
Apparently she has a dildo on her head, which is the cause of... all this... to begin with.
1699706 I gotta say...people have started to send in more Twilight-Hate fics ever since Season 3 started...it makes me a sad Prinny, dood.
Well. This was certainly something that was written.
And, that's about all that can be said for it.
1699641
I'll include more in the next chapters.
1699680
SHE'S CHAINED UP IN THE LIBRARY WHILE SPIKE RAPES HER IN THE ASS. SHE DOESN'T HAVE A COMPUTER. USE LOGIC.
1699681
Yes. I have plenty of video evidence. I will upload it ASAP.
1699692
BECAUSE HER CUTIE MARK KIND OF LOOKS LIKE A FRACTAL OF GOATSE.
1699706
Now you're getting it.
1699730 What is a Fractal of Goatse, dood?
1699724
It has nothing to do with Season 3. I hate Twilight because she gets vaginal lubricant all over all the books in the library and that's just disgusting.
1699725
Something tells me you came.
1699735
Click here.
Not porn, faggots.
1699724
Wow, really? I hear what you're saying, Twilight is one of my favourite characters...
1699741 I dunno if I got this figured out, but:
A) I don't think that looks like Twilight Cutie Mark at all...looks like four trees grown close to a pit hole with a mini-black hole within it. also reminds me of the Heart of Fear from World of Warcraft (cause I decided to give you even more ammo to hit me with in your reply)
B) Not nice to call people names.
C) I think Twilight would have a heart attack if she spills milk near a book, forget vaginal lube.
D) I dunno why I am doing this to protect my favorite fictional animal.
E) You made a account under 4 hours ago.
So a new question arises...why do people troll? I don't get how people find amusement in other people's grief...it's not really saying it's "smart" it's pretty much being a jerk for the sake of being a jerk from what I see. So if you can please, tell me why people troll others? is it over a dare? is it because they find amusement over it? Are they getting paid to do it? What, dood? And I don't mean just you, dood. I mean like all the people that like to do this.
I do thank you for the correct tags, though.
1699769
So a new question arises...why so serious?
1699794 Because I don't like not knowing why people troll, it's enrages and fascinates me. But in all seriousness, I'm just butt-hurt at all the Anti-Twilight lately, dood.
1699798
I know you're butthurt. I can tell. I'm not trolling, guy. This is completely serious.
this is what you're fic did to me
Clearly OP knows the story is trash. I mean, you do, right? But God damn if it didn't make for a great comment thread!
I take of my hat to you sir. Well played.
Guys give him a break its his first fiction so take it easy. he is very new so let just say hes bad for now and ones he gets better a better maybe he can be one of the top writers. I believe in him
1699741
something tells me that, you my good friend, are, and idiot, and i should lock you in a room that has mutants from Chernobyl, and, then give you to the Cybermen.
Hahaha funny.... Guess you have a fucked-up mind too.
she ripped out Dash's vocal cords.how the hell! Then they raped her for 600 hours straight. .I i don't think so....really. Though there was a huge-ass investigation. They have thoses? if it works then the old guy will get put in jail.Dash jumps out her window I was all NOOOOOO dash hit Scootaloo.. killing her.OH FUCK YA U LITTLE BITCH touch dash and u get a face full of it.... the Wonderbolts dug her back up and shoved her corpse down a stinky latrine. why waste there time anyway she would be found and the wonder bolts dna will be found on dash .And the hole ass investigation would have got them too..but..um you just forgot right? I'm sure. her friend would never NEVER FORGET about her they would make time even if it was years..And magic! just grow them limbs back.second ch seems..short..and kind of good well writen but sill its like you fast forward too much