Hello, do you have a moment? I'd like to tell you about my gritty, action packed new series. You've never seen anything this real before. It will change the way you live your life and see the world. Mostly it's about cartoon horses doing sex
And then a comment complained that anon used too many "thens". And then the commentator got his own little fanfic where he was tortured by ponies. And then he felt like he he didn't use enough "thens" to prove his point, so he made a filler sentence. And then he made another. And then he made another. And then, anon made the CMC go cupcakes on the commentator.
What was....THE POINT i read this if you show the reader what the hell was goin on then i would be fine i care not if you ...Um did you say rape it seems more like some little kid writeing this And then she took a big shit in her mouth..at the same time rainbow dash was speed fucking it to the point where the fake cum mixs with the moist crap..GREAT JOB.i in no way she this as a clop fic just a bin of garbage .But this is only the first ch as i see it you just made this for no reason then started write it for real.all go as far as ch 3 so if i dont like it im not going to slow down to spread the word about how dumb it is..but why do that anyway no one cares....:
I don't get it, what's the point? It's not erotic, or at least to me, and it's not emotional enough to be tragic.....are you just trying to piss us off?
Cause let me tell you, you kinda failed. I don't hate the story, I find it retarded but at the worst I'm mildly annoyed at it, like how you would be annoyed at retarded secretary.
I don't even know why I felt I had to say that, just curios what you wanted to accomplish I guess.
I...um...what?
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"Spike?"
"Yes Twilight?"
"I think I'll stay off the internet for a while."
That was the single best thing I have ever read. Bravo!
And then a comment complained that anon used too many "thens". And then the commentator got his own little fanfic where he was tortured by ponies. And then he felt like he he didn't use enough "thens" to prove his point, so he made a filler sentence. And then he made another. And then he made another. And then, anon made the CMC go cupcakes on the commentator.
What did i just read, you know what.
FUCK LOGIC Im done with life.
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All my what.
pretty epic actually
What was....THE POINT i read this if you show the reader what the hell was goin on then i would be fine i care not if you ...Um did you say rape it seems more like some little kid writeing this And then she took a big shit in her mouth..at the same time rainbow dash was speed fucking it to the point where the fake cum mixs with the moist crap..GREAT JOB.i in no way she this as a clop fic just a bin of garbage .But this is only the first ch as i see it you just made this for no reason then started write it for real.all go as far as ch 3 so if i dont like it im not going to slow down to spread the word about how dumb it is..but why do that anyway no one cares....:
I don't get it, what's the point? It's not erotic, or at least to me, and it's not emotional enough to be tragic.....are you just trying to piss us off?
Cause let me tell you, you kinda failed. I don't hate the story, I find it retarded but at the worst I'm mildly annoyed at it, like how you would be annoyed at retarded secretary.
I don't even know why I felt I had to say that, just curios what you wanted to accomplish I guess.