...yeah There's actually a lot I can say about this exact story, was a bit too short, Chrysalis could have made use of her magic to aid in the brainwashing... All in all it was an alright story, it was enough. -edit- I.. Guess the second chapter helped with what I said.
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.......Why did I read this again?...
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please don't ask me
hopefully it wasn't the same reason for why i wrote it, although i don't think that'd work
I liked it. Just sayin.
MOARRRRRRR
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that can be arranged
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NOT SURE IF GUSTA
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me gusta
Not nearly as dark or disturbing as many other stories invlving Mind break on this site. but that's actually a good thing.
Kinda rush, though.
Meh, could have been better. The fact that you broke Celestia so easily isn't right, but good otherwise.
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The implication is that's she's been there for several days.
then again this is about ponies having sex fidsjgjfafmasfa
cool i like how my name is in purple to imply i write sex stories
...yeah
There's actually a lot I can say about this exact story, was a bit too short, Chrysalis could have made use of her magic to aid in the brainwashing...
All in all it was an alright story, it was enough.
-edit-
I.. Guess the second chapter helped with what I said.