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You need someone to correct grammatical errors, but I'm loving the plot.
Have an epic picture as a reward!
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um.... either they lied, you forgot to add 'not'/'won't' or Celestia is a masochist (as in punishment would be not getting slapped!)!
Did you mean all of the ponies or just Celestia (it should then be womAn)?
You have many faults in this chapter.... get a proofreader!
You have to start a ne paragraph whenever a different person begins to speak. Always. There should never be more then one person talking per paragraph.
I don't really see how these guys are going to mesh in the new society. And why are they freaking Demi-Gods? Not that ti's not cool and all, but still, how or why?
1789816 ah, I remember that game. My evil save was named "Slit-Pipes Mcgee".
Was anyone else reading Forge's lines in a Scottish accent?
2634938 you too! it makes everything better
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2634938 maybe...
I laughed my ass of as they slapped Celestia, oh for how many years have I dreamed of a non-clopfic where they do that?
LLOLLLOLLLOLLOLLLOLLOLLOLLLOLLOLLOOLLOLLOOLL BUT SEX :3 [youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=fqyjOc3EpT4]
these guys sound like they come from skyrim....i like that.
Attacking a random sapient on sight on a world covered with sapient species is not something for the ponies to be proud of. It basically screams "stupid" at the top of their little lungs.
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Perhaps. But put yourself in their shoes. If a statue suddenly turned into a live creature, and it threatened a princess, what would you expect? Any credible lethal threat should result in officers of the law intervening. The guards are for all intents and purposes officers of the law, and an armed man is more than capable of carrying out a lethal threat. Explain again just how stupid the guards are, and how they should have reacted peacefully.
Some sort of ritual I assume? And a strange one too.